FRESH AND DIFFERENT. GREAT PLOT.

"This book has a great start. The plot already had me captured. To see the world from the prospective of a baby is something new. I do have some critiques though. Although I gave you 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ you really need to work on your grammar and your sentence structure. I gave you this rating because I would never knock a writer who just beginning to write. My advice would be to study 📖 other peoples writings. 🛑DO NOT PLAGIARIZE🛑. By reading other novels you'll get a sense of how grammar should be used and how sentences should be formed. You have a great plot. I can see this going places. But reading this can take away from the awesomeness of it. Only because of the grammar, and sentence structure. If you need any more advice leave a message on my wall.😆 - Aierodesa🌙"