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Vato loco .. payasos story

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Summary

Sometimes life doesn’t go how you want it to go but you gotta take it how it is ya know?- payaso

Status
2yrs ago
Chapters
85
Rating
4.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

The beginning

Characters

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Payaso aka Jesus

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Moises (best friend)

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Criminal aka Richard (oldest brother)

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Loco aka Isaiah (middle brother

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Victoria(mom)

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Payaso was only 9 years old when his street life started his brothers tried there best to keep him out of it but he knew there was no other way... he was the son of of young strong Chicana his father was in and out of the picture it didn't matter to him because he had his brothers and his mother he felt complete.. it was Saturday afternoon the neighborhood kids where outside playing it was summer time music was playing everything seemed perfect his brothers where having a carne asada in the front yard with the homies while payaso and Moises played on the street

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Payaso: wanna go down to the liqour store and get some soda?

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Moises: sure let me go get some money I'll meet you out front

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Payaso: ok!

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They went there ways payaso ran into his house and got some change he had hiding as he ran out to wait for Moises he heard a lot of noise his brother criminal started to yell

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Criminal: drive by!!!

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Payaso stood frozen he didn't know what do he saw moises running down the street from his house when the car rolled down there windows and started shooting criminal pulled Jesus to the ground the bullets barely missing him .. but as he got up he looked around and he couldn't find Moises

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Payaso: mo!!

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Payaso ran to the sidewalk where he had last saw him Moises was facing face down in a puddle of his own blood everything was slow motion criminal and loco pulled payaso back

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Criminal: somebody call the ambulance!

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Moises mom came out running with a baby in her arms she fell to the floor as she saw her sons body life less

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Payaso- mo please don't go please don't leave me!

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Flash back over...present day he's 16 years old a young lil hoodlum

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He sat up fast it was all a dream

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Payaso: Fuck I hate that dream

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He got up and put on some clothes he could smell his moms cooking he walked into the kitchen

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Payaso: mourning

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Victoria: mourning mi vida how did you sleep?

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Payaso: so so I guess

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Loco: same dream?

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Payaso: yea it's just weird I been having it over and over again I wake up once criminal has me in his arms though

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Loco: it's probably cuz you miss him carnal don't trip he's coming home soon with the prop 57 shit he should be home anytime soon

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Criminal had gotten sentenced to 5 years for being caught with 3 bricks of cocaine the prop 57 was voted in not long ago giving the hoodlums with drug charges a chance to come home

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Victoria: and plus mijo we can always go visit him

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Payaso: yea I know I just hope He doesn't hate me for ending up the way I did

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He shook his head

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After Moises death the young child soul payaso had in him disappeared he started hanging out with the older kids slanging and smoking criminal hated it and always got to him about it

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Criminal: you can't be hanging out with those idiots Jesus you need to watch your shit

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Payaso: who cares! There my friends !

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Criminal shook his head

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Criminal: you really wanna join this life you really wanna live the way we do?

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Payaso nodded

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Payaso: I've always wanted to be like you carnal tall and strong

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Criminal: look mijo your young you don't understand this life please be good and stay outta trouble

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Payaso: ok

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But payaso didn't that same time the cops caught him up after curfew and brought him back to the house

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Criminal answered the door

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Criminal: what he do?

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Cop: out after curfew and had a pipe with him I don't think it's his though

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Payaso looked down

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Criminal: well thanks for bringing him home officer

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Loco: what happened?

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Criminal pushed payaso inside sitting him down

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Criminal: now

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Fucking explain to me why you have pipe?

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Loco: no

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Payaso: it's not mine! I was holding it for somebody!

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Criminal: and who's is it!

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Loco: you can't force him to tell he ain't no snitch Richard you have to see he ain't turning back and yelling at him is only gonna push him more into

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It moms at work so this stays between us .. I don't care who you hangout with but those guys ain't your homies if there making you carry there dirty shit tomorrow I'll take you to the OG he'll show you what a real G is

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Criminal shook his head

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Criminal: you gotta learn some how...

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Present time

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Loco: you gotta stop with this shit stop isolating yourself you are who you are and it's ok now go get your shit get ready and let's bounce we got money to make homie

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Payaso: haha ok

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Payaso got up and showered he shaved his head and put on his dickies and a black shirt with some chucks on

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Loco did the same

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Victoria: please be safe my god bless you

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She gave them both there blessings and they walked out and jumped in locos car

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Payaso: ay so when I turn 17 do I get your car?

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Loco: haha nope make some money save it and get one not that hard homie tu sabes haha

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Payaso shook his head

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Payaso: so where we going?

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Loco: the jefe has a mission we need to do time to get paid homie

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Payaso nodded

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They drove up to the big homies house the homies where already there with the homegirls hanging out

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Lil one aka Vanessa 15

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Shorty aka Jesi 15

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Joker aka Marcos 19

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Downer aka mado

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Looney aka everado

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Smiley boy aka Jose

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Chino aka Ruben

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Brown eyes aka Nancy

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Dimplez aka Martha

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Saint aka lupe

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Loco: stay your ass out here I gotta talk to him

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Payaso: alright sure

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Payaso wasn't into talking to females he never really had a girlfriend he was more into getting the hoes and sleeping around but it didn't stop the homegirls from trying to get at him

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Dimplez: hey cutie!

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Payaso: what's up?

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Dimplez was the hoe of the group but she was still a homegirl

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Dimplez hugged him

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Dimplez: nothing much so you coming to that kick back tomorrow?

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She gave him a cute smile

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Payaso: maybe I don't haha are you?

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Dimplez: yea wanna kick it?

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Chino: dam dimplez shit calm down haha

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Payaso: ay leave her alone haha what's up homie?

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Chino: nothin much what you guys up to?

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Loco walked out and hugged the girls

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Loco: payaso lets go we got a drop to do

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Payaso: gotta go drop some shit you down to kick it later smoke it?

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Chino: hell yea my pad?

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Payaso: yea fo sho bring some girls over let's have some fun haha

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Loco saw that him saying that hurt shorty.. jesi had always had a crush on payaso since they where young but she was so shy she wouldn't talk much to him payaso barely noticed she was there

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Loco: ay shorty you down for the ride?

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Shorty:uhhh sure

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Lil one pushed her

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Loco: lil one one you to come on

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Loco had a crush on lil one but she was to young he was 19 and she 15 but he knew age is just a number

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payaso:ay you sure it's safe taking them I don't wanna risk it?

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Loco: it'll make it less suspicious shit you guys ride in the back Vanessa ride with me chula

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She smiled

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The ride was awkward at first but payaso talked

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Payaso: so why you so quiet?

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He got closer to her she got nervous

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Shorty: haha I don't know

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She blushed

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Payaso: haha how you don't know?

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