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The cradle snatcher

"I don't like stories that have no ending, and this is a good story as it kept me reading and wanting more"

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Nice

"I did not expect to enjoy this book so much as it isn’t my usual genre.. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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The cradle snatcher

"Good book so far "

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The cradle snatcher

"OH WOW!!! Definitely a page turner. Hate to see it involves kids but it got me hooked all ready"

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The Cradle Snatcher

"An avid crime/thriller reader had me adding your story to my reading list as soon as I spotted it - and you didn't disappoint! There were a few places where you could tidy up a fraction - make the flow smoother. I hope to read more of this soon - want to know where you are taking it. Thank you!"

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Very invested by the story in a short time

"Very well written, all of the characters feel really well defined in a short time."

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Coastal killings

"The story line was good I enjoyed the fact how jealousy n revenge can destroy people "

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Interesting start

"A very intriguing start to a mystery, engaging characters and a very interesting synopsis. Would like to read more..."

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THE CRADLE SNATCHER

"In my opinion, the author of this book has a unique and fascinating writing style, because the actions are very connected, helping me imagine better the story. Even if I can see some grammar mistakes, they are not that obvious. For me it's clear that this captivating chapter is only the beginning of an amazing book. I think that the author should continue the novel, since in my opinion it has an interesting subject, it is written with care and essential details."

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Child bleeder

"The story was absolutely fantastic and mind thrilling .Hard to keep down Enjoyed it thoroughly."

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Cradle Snatcher

"It was a very good kept me interested to me turning pages I really enjoyed your style and your correct vocabulary thank you so much for presenting this book to me until next time author"

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The cradle snatcher

"Captivating, filled with suspense. very good flow with just enough detail but not enough to gross you out... Don't like the ending... And what really happened "last year" "

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Great Crime Thriller

"I love the way the story unfolds over the chapters and the suspense it builds up. Don’t wanna spoiler anyone here :D"

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Cradle snatcher

"Good story but heartbreaking . "

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Cradle Snatcher

"Great book"

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The Cradle Snatcher

"I absolutely loved the character of Lauren Ryder. Beautiful! Hooked from the very first page, I got swallowed up in the terrible murders of the young girls. A lovely homicidal related story. Definitely kept me on tender hooks."

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The Cradle Snatcher

"This story had me from the first page! It was fast paced and believable, In an ideal world Sam would get better, and Detective Lauren Ryder and he would become engaged or married, And Peter O`Donnell, well I have a death wish for him! I look forward hopefully to a 2nd book. NRF author of The Lost Souls of Gilfords Falls also on Inkitt.com."

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The Craddle Snatcher

"The plot remembers me of the classic The Pledge by Friedrich Durrenmatt, except here we have more girls murdered, but it will be difficult to beat the original. Regarding the style, it seems to be a bit too wordy."

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Good

"Still need to see the rest but so far so good"

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Fascinating.

"The story isn't that detailed but it has everything covered. I like the characters but we have a really shallow description of them and it's on point. I thnik you could narrow down to show the feelings of the parents that lost their kid. There is also some spelling mistakes her and there. Check up on that."

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