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WOW!

"I have read alot of "erotica" but this one was...well..overwhelming at the least! Beautifuly written, excellent characters, especialy Lucy. I was taken by from the first, such an interesting insight into Lucy's thoughts and feelings (and her "feelings"!) I think I fell for her a little....please please please.. More of Lucy!! Aside from all this, Tremour writes HOT like I have not read before, absolutley white hot HOT!! Thankyou Tremour X)"

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Lovely story that is well written

"Who is Lucy... how do I begin? 1. Intriguing plot that pulls the reader into the story. At times I felt myself feeling upset after the experiences that Lucy has to go through (even the first part with the arrogant man in the bar - but this also shows there are plenty of nice people in the world - ie. the kind bartender that kicked the man out of the bar after the confrontation) 2. Eye opener; what I mean by this is.. I have never read a book about a transgender women. This is my first one. I didn't know what to expect and well, I am surprised how much I am enjoying the story. I have thousands of stories to choose from on Inkitt and I'm so glad I chose to read this. I landed on this story with an open mind and I find myself always turning back to it. Lucy is a lovely character that I am constantly thinking about and I want to continue reading about her experiences in the story. 3. The sentence structure is detailed enough to give the reader an imagination of the settings and characters. 4. The Story line is straight forward and easy to follow which is always a plus! Can't wait to read more!"

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"I liked the fact we get to see why she has become the person she is...what build her. Don't really like the part when they are doing it n you bring us back to a memory of another person even though she's in the minds of doing it with Walker uk. I'd deffo recommend this to my friend thou🫢"

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Who is Lucy?

"First and foremost, the summary really drew me in. I'm enjoying the plot, although sometime I do feel upset at the challenges that the MC has to go through. This is my first time reading a story involving transgender characters and I didn't know I was going to enjoy it this much! I love the author's writing style, and grammar. It makes the story easier to understand if the writer knows what they are doing, and how they're doing it."

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