Sarah Möhlmann

Toronto, Ontario

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Great plot with dramatic turns!

I will start this review to state this,

BINGE WORTHY

Are you looking for a good relaxing (and spicy at times!) read? Take a gander at Rebel Heart, you won't be disappointed. This is such a great story (I am usually more of a fantasy reader too, so that says a lot)!

The main character Mel, although she has a potty mouth, she also has such a dynamic personality that I thoroughly loved read. Under her anti-social behaviours, deep down there is someone who just wants to be loved. I can't wait to see where life will take her.

All of her friends have a different role in her life that sends her on a crazy dramatic adventure. I am anxious and excited to read more updates on this on-going story.

The writer's style was descriptive and gave me a feel of the scene/settings perfectly. I felt like I was watching a movie in my head at times.

Lastly, I wanted to point out that I could tell the author put a lot of thought into the plot / storyline, because each chapter blends perfectly together.

Way to go!

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Woman's Resolve to Stay Single

The author has great detail explaining character and setting, not to mention the great grammar and punctuation. The overall feel for the story is interesting and relatable (which is always a bonus!), I'm only a couple chapters in and I want to keep reading! Great job.

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Lovely story that is well written

Who is Lucy... how do I begin?

1. Intriguing plot that pulls the reader into the story. At times I felt myself feeling upset after the experiences that Lucy has to go through (even the first part with the arrogant man in the bar - but this also shows there are plenty of nice people in the world - ie. the kind bartender that kicked the man out of the bar after the confrontation)
2. Eye opener; what I mean by this is.. I have never read a book about a transgender women. This is my first one. I didn't know what to expect and well, I am surprised how much I am enjoying the story. I have thousands of stories to choose from on Inkitt and I'm so glad I chose to read this. I landed on this story with an open mind and I find myself always turning back to it. Lucy is a lovely character that I am constantly thinking about and I want to continue reading about her experiences in the story.
3. The sentence structure is detailed enough to give the reader an imagination of the settings and characters.
4. The Story line is straight forward and easy to follow which is always a plus!

Can't wait to read more!

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Intriguing Plot and Great Writing

I believe the author hit the marks for descriptive detailing and encapsulating the reader in the story

I visualized the settings to the 'T' based on the writing style and I am impressed the way the author can use words to completely submerge us into the story and settings.

Sometimes its hard for a reader to get pulled into a fantasy plot, especially when its a completely different world!

The characters remained consistent with their dialogue and personalities throughout the chapters, I enjoyed reading different perspectives from the characters, and the author did this well by keeping the flow of the story on point. (sometimes in other novels its hard to follow when the POV is always changing)

I feel like this story is good enough to be on a show!

I appreciate the creativity of this novel.

Way to go!

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Excellent plot and characters! LOVE this!

I am almost done reading Pandemia, and I want to point out that this is defiantly a top page turner for me! (I am usually reading more fantasy/dark romance stories)

1. Plot and settings were laid out perfectly, and the details were not overly descriptive, but gave me an opportunity to imagine what was happening in my head. It was like I was watching a movie/soap opera at times.

2. Character development and personalities remained consistent, and I loved how I gained perspective on how they were feeling in the moment (I don't want to give too much away if you haven't read the story yet), especially if it was an 'affair' type situation that some people have a hard time understanding. There is always more to the story then just the actions themselves, and I thought the author encapsulated this perfectly.

3. There are good bits of humor in the story that had me laughing literally out loud. Natalie is quite the comic relief in such intense moments!

4. Lastly, I want to point out, that for an Erotic novel, this defiantly had my gears turning, maybe this is an unnecessary comment, but I like to point it out because I think its important for anyone searching through the Erotic section.

P.S As a woman, its nice to read a first person perspective from the man in some of the more steamy situations, which is always added bonus.

Way to go and this is excellent work! I could tell the author put a lot of thought and effort into this.

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Suspenseful and great dialogues

I really enjoyed reading this story! This is defiantly not for a sensitive person! (I prefer reading these types of stories, it keeps me on my toes)

Miguel is an interesting character that I would like to learn more about, or maybe where all of his anger stems from. I know the story is not finished, so I'm looking forward to reading more!

One of my favourite things that initially stuck out was the dialogue between all of the characters (especially the young friends of Tay and Jules) It's sometimes hard for an author to put perspective and dialogue that gives a sense of who the character is, but this author has done a fantastic job doing so!

I would also even consider writing another novel just about the other high school friends, I absolutely love reading their interactions and thoughts.

One more side note; the added Spanish was the cherry on top to the already great dialogue!

Amazing job and keep writing!!

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Relatable and Striking

I feel for the author, especially when I read the parts regarding the political and emotional state we are living in. No matter what country you live in, everyone can relate to this poem, one way or another.

Great job and I would love to read more by the author!

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Very Interesting Plot, Can't wait for more!

I am a sucker for dark crime stories and very rarely do I see a well written perspective from the killer. I was completely enthralled with the flashbacks and I find it that helps the reader get insight on what is going on in the killers head instead of just assuming he is completely insane. There is always an interesting perspective, even if it's coming from a serial killer's head! My only suggestion will be to separate the paragraphs and dialogue so it is easier to follow. Other then that everything is fantastic and I'm excited to read more and stay updated. I've added to my library and will be reading closely. Way to go author!

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Great story line! I will continue to read!

The first thing that stuck out in the story was the character development. Fantastic, I really got a feel of who Mrs. Addison was from the very beginning. I am anxious to continue to see where the story goes, which is an added bonus and another reason why I will continue reading the whole way through. The author describes settings and and character dialogue in the way I love, not overly descriptive but enough for me to use my own imagination when reading. I never lost interest and my eyes flowed from paragraph to paragraph flawlessly. Another point I would like to make is that the author allows the characters to control the flow of the story, this allows me to imagine more of what the characters are doing instead of info dumping the plot and setting. Can't wait to read more and great job!

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