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Break Me

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Summary

Seventeen-year old Alex Carter has been dealt the worst cards in life. She is tired, tired of feeling numb. She wants to let loose and enjoy at least a few months in her life, where she doesn't have to worry about someone in the hospital and how much longer they may have to live. She wants to feel. To heal. To mourn and most of all stop feeling numb. James Smith is not your average bad-boy high school senior. He's not arrogant, cocky, rich or handsome. Well, maybe not the last part. He's had a happy life as long as he can remember. His father left his family when he was 12 years old. His mother stepped in and played the role of both his father and mother. He helped raise his 5-year old sister and guided her. James doesn't believe in love, having experienced it first-hand and what a disaster it turned out to be. What happens when James mother suddenly falls sick and he doesn't have the money to pay for her treatment and coincidentally, as if it were a miracle, someone offers him money, money to break Alex's heart? Will sparks fly or will they end up burning each other more than they have been burnt themselves?

Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Author's Note

Hi! Thank you so much for choosing to read my story. My name is Luna Willow and I am 23 years old soon to be turning 24. I’ve read a lot of books on Wattpad and Inkitt, and I’m sick of the same-ole cliched story of the bad boy and the good girl. But at the same time, I love cliches because those are the type of books that you know is going to result in a happy ending and so I have done my best to try and make this book into a happy ending(I promise this is going to be the only spoiler I give for the book) because like I said, I’m a sucker for happy endings.

Please bear in mind that this is my first book and I will have a lot of mistakes because I am not a professional. I am trying my best to do this and phew! it’s a hell lot of work.

If you see any grammatical or spelling errors, please don’t hesitate to tell me about it, because considering the fact that English is my first language, I should not have errors in grammar.

But oh well. To err is human and all that.

Please don’t copy my idea. I know the bet story-line isn’t the most original idea but I have tried my best to evolve the idea into something different.

All rights reserved and all that, so in case you want to copy paste my story into your book, think again *stands with sabre and hulk on right side*. I’m kidding. But seriously, don’t copy my work, because it is mine and I have spent hours on it.

Updates will be extremely slow because, believe it or not, I have a life outside Inkitt! Also there will be days when I come on wattpad just to read and not write, because I am a very very lazy person.

That’s about it and thank you once again for clicking on this story. I hope it will not dissapoint you too much.

See you soon

Luna

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