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Amazing, worth reading & writer has a strong grip on her content

" Worth reading Writer has a strong grip on her content , cannot let a reader pass by without reading it till end "

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Loved it

"Loved this story. I couldn't put the book down....I had to finish it up."

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Rachel This book was great

"I found that the book and the author was great. I can not wait to start another book"

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Rachael

"I would recommend it to friends who like to read love the mystery going on love Rachel is chactcher would read more of her books"

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"Catchy unexpectedly. I suggest you publish this in NovelStar. A lot of readers will love your work."

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Sad

"The plot is unexpectable, but i hate sad ending"

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Rachel

"Wonderful story...but such a plot and a cliffhanger. I certainly hope there is a sequel to this story...you can't possibly let it end this way!!! Please say there will be more to this story!!! makapueo65 "

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Rachel

"This story was a thriller, a teenage decent writer and a happy medium in this world of sometimes confusion! I loved it! Write more sequels, continue, updated version, so we can rejoice at the outcome of positivity! "

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Quite interesting

"You've left Me hanging there 😂😂 nicely done. 👏👏 overall, the plot is kinda mysterious at first, and well everything revealed at the end. 😎😎"

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Quite interesting

"You've left Me hanging there 😂😂 nicely done. 👏👏 overall, the plot is kinda mysterious at first, and well everything revealed at the end. 😎😎"

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Danielle

"Really like it x"

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Great story

"Oh my god! I'm freaking crying. Oh no poor Nate. I loved this story very much. Oh god! I can't stop crying 😭"

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Awesome

"Nice book Luved it "

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Rachel

"Very thrilling and suspensory novel"

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Rachel

"I would recommend this to people who love crime novels. Overall is good and I'm inspired from this book to write mine. I hope that you could keep on continuing writing books with this kind of writing."

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Ggggg

"I love the flow of the story and the choice of words.No hard words that are brain cracking"

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Rachel

"I am heartbroken 💔💔😭😭😭😭 and my day is spoilt. Why there's no miracle for Rachel after finding her dad. Am so sad😭😭"

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Cool story

"I’m in love😊"

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The story was amazing in the beginning as well as in the end but i just hate that the story is left in between.

"The story was interesting at first. Did not expect it would have such a big plot twist. I really loved it and also hate it a the same because it leaves so many unanswered questions. The story should either be complete or have a sequel. Two years already and no response yet from the writer about the sequel. If you read this please bring a sequel 🙏. "

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Rachel

"Nice story to read "

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