What is your opinion?
Brotherly crush
"Story ended to quick"
The best🤓
"I started reading this book and it's all I can think about. I'm sure a huge fan and I can't wait for the next update Ps please please give them a happy ending 🥺❤️ I loveeee your work"
Brotherly Crush
"The books is so good, I love the plot, the slow burn and the MC I hope the writer updates it because this is paining my heart "
So far, so good
"Hate all the grammatical errors, but love the story. When will you finish it?"
Brotherly Crush
"I really have liked this book. I am a sucker for a good love story and a little suspense. "
Brotherly Crush
"‘Hole’up!!! Wayment!!! What happened???!! It was just getting good!!! You cannot stop there!!! You gotta keep going!! The storyline is really GOOD!! Mostly bc I’ve been there, done that & had a baby! So it was nice to read a salacious story that was similar to my situation but didn’t involve me. Also, the pictures kinda threw me off at first, but then I realized you were just giving us a visual of what was going on. Which is pretty cool but some of the pictures were either blurry or too big like the text messages. And I couldn’t read them cuz the words were cut off. And you some misspellings, but other than that, the story is a GOOD READ!!👌🏾👍🏾 PLEASE, add more to the story. Also, the chapters you thought were gonna be long really weren’t due to the fact the story was so entertaining!"
Review
"Thankyou for writing such an amazing book. I love how you developed the cjaracters "
I ant read fast enough
"I like this story. My fave so far"
Great Story
"This is great, although I’ve only read the first chapter, I feel there will be a lot of dramas and twists. There are great imagery in it, and speaking from the character’s POV is a great way to tell a story like this. You use a lot of description which is great because that makes readers feel as if they are there 👍! It truly is a great start, I will continue reading it, I enjoy reading about interracial couples. I, myself have a book on that. But, it’s not about me right now! Anyways, continue writing great books like these, and I hope you have much success!!! Again, great job!!! Edit: (I forgot to write this but I also gave you a four stars on grammar because there are a few grammatical errors, but no matter. I’m sure you will improve with time!!! I’m also working on that too, but anyways, good job!) "
Brotherly Crush
"I, personally, love first-person books because it's like I can be the charachter and feel how they feel, regardless of boy or girl pov. And it's easier to follow and visualize for me. I like the way it was written, but I wish she was a little more sure with herself. I'm more of a blunt and assertive person, so that's probably why her going back and forth or not speaking up for herself, is killing me, lbs. I think that she allows herself to let others decide for her since relationship with her family are not strong to model in her own life from what I got from the book--which is understandable. If she loses him because of her inability to fight for herself and folight for them, even against her best friend, imma be mad, tbh, cant eeeeeveeeennn lie. I love books where fighting for love is there, and of course it's not over, but she needs to stop people pleasing. Ik people really have an issue with trying to please people all the time, and that's not easy to unlearn, but man. I secretly think her best friend wants her to be with her brother, but doesn't want him to hurt her (Nia) and destroy their (Nia and Melli) friendship and is just acting like she would have a problem just to not encourage their relationship and it be awkward between them after, if it fails. We shall see what comes. I normally don't do reviews until the book is done, but whatevs, and sorry for it being so much. Besides technical grammar and spelling issues and time jumps without much detail in between, I really like this book; can't wait for more!!!😊😊 P.S. I like the time jumps, but just wish there was more detail in there before or after or finishing what happened and them time jumping."
Great story !
"I am excited for the update. Great story, thank you author♥️"
Brotherly Crush
"Now the suspense is really killing me. What is going to happen next? What is going to be Melli's response?"
Not sure is there more
"A little drawn out but love it can't wait till the end"
Brotherly crush
"I hope it gets better because this reads like he say, she say stuff #Iwantyou,idontjuniorhighschoolread. "
Interesting
"Nia needs to grow a backbone,"
Brotherly love
"Great strory I hope you upload more chapters ❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️"
Ggg
"A good book but repetitive"
Brotherly crush
"Some grammatical errors but loving the storyline so far. "
Denial.
"The author has a clear vision of what they want to put on paper but has some trouble bringing it across clearly. However the story is interesting. Keep at it. You'll get better with time. "
It's got potential
"There is no flow to your story. You have time jumps that are random and don't add anything to the story. The romance between the brother and Nia doesn't really fit because we barely see them interacting aside from him kissing her those random moment he does pop up. And the tension doesn't make sense considering this story took place probably over the of span 2 years and for the entirety of those two years she's been telling him no I'm not interested so it's kind of creepy actually. I think the story has a lot of potential especially with the MC being a black female and we have so few of those with those but I think you could reread your story or get a beta reader to go over this "
