So far, So good 😊
This story is great so far! I took time to read it though, and I’m loving that you use a lot of imagery in it. Readers like it when you use a lot of description since it make them feel as if they are there, which is great! I don’t think Im using as much in my book though, I’ve had reviews on that before, which is something I may have to work on. But, anywayssss!
Read the story now
Although, I gave you four stars for grammar and punctuation, don’t take it in a bad way. I didn’t do that so I can be rude. I did it because I’m an honest person and because, at the beginning of the story, you did not put punctuations where it needed to be. But that’s okay because I saw improvement in the second chapter!
I love the characters so far, Zeru seems like a funny, and nice character! Marcus is handsome what with the description an all! Lucy is beautiful, I can imagine and she is strong! She might have lost her grandmother (idk because it was not said that she was dead, so maybe there is hope). But if there isn’t, I think Lucy is strong to get through it!
This is my review on this awesome book! I hope you keep up the good work!!! 💟