Anonymous_Queenn

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Hi! I publish new chapters every Friday at 3:00 PM Eastern Time. Please check out my story. I’m open to any suggestions. Add me on discord: Anonymous_Queenn6831

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So far, So good 😊

This story is great so far! I took time to read it though, and I’m loving that you use a lot of imagery in it. Readers like it when you use a lot of description since it make them feel as if they are there, which is great! I don’t think Im using as much in my book though, I’ve had reviews on that before, which is something I may have to work on. But, anywayssss!

Although, I gave you four stars for grammar and punctuation, don’t take it in a bad way. I didn’t do that so I can be rude. I did it because I’m an honest person and because, at the beginning of the story, you did not put punctuations where it needed to be. But that’s okay because I saw improvement in the second chapter!

I love the characters so far, Zeru seems like a funny, and nice character! Marcus is handsome what with the description an all! Lucy is beautiful, I can imagine and she is strong! She might have lost her grandmother (idk because it was not said that she was dead, so maybe there is hope). But if there isn’t, I think Lucy is strong to get through it!

This is my review on this awesome book! I hope you keep up the good work!!! 💟

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Very Well

Imagery. There is great use of description, make me feel like I’m actually there! I love it, that’s what readers look for. Also, you have great vocabulary and so far I haven’t seen no grammatical errors. This is going great so far, truly. I hope you succeed and wish you good luck in life and in the life of an author. Good job! 🧸

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Great Plot

Hi! Okay so here’s it comes:

I like your story and the plot seems interesting. But I also think there are some grammatical errors in it, but that’s okay. There are times when you need to capitalize a word but you didn’t. Also, times where you needed to add “, or .”

But besides that, I think it’s a wonderful story so far. I also think it’s pretty funny too. The guy with blue eyes asked at the end of the chapter “what is your name” but Raya already said her name before she was going to ask their orders. I guess he wasn’t paying attention to that! 😂

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Wonderful plot

Hi! It took me a while to get to your story but I finally read it! 😊

Although I’ve only read the first chapter, I feel there is going to be a roller coaster!! 😊 I love the plot of this story, and I like the fact that I’ve already learned a lot about the girl, Destiny. I like that you added a little bit of background on her, her family, relationships, and that sort of thing.

You writing style is amazing, there are absolutely no grammatical errors, not that I’ve encountered so far. I also like the use of imagery. You describe the scene and the actions, which I think is great and it takes a skillful writer to do that. I’m new, and I also want to become a writer which is why I started writing my own book on here. I try my best to add as much imagery. 🤷‍♀️ (check it out whenever you are free, your opinion will very much help me!)

I feel like this book should have more recognition, I think this is a great book and you should keep on the hard work!

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Great Story

Hi! I have read only two chapters so far, and I would just like to say, I don’t normally read these kind of books (not 18+, but a little more younger 16+. Since I am writing a book too, but it’s not like strong erotica. I don’t use many bad words, and I censored them).

Anyways, I enjoyed reading yours. There is a lot of description in your story which is good because that makes readers feels as if they were really there. I liked the fact that you understand each of your characters and now I have a pretty clear understanding of them also.

Your grammar and punctuation isn’t bad, it’s just that where are some misspellings. Like in the first chapter or so, “So many woman”, I just think you should’ve put “so many women” instead since were talking about multiple women.

But besides the spellings, I enjoyed reading the two chapters of your story, and I hope you keep up the good work.

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Great Story

This is great, although I’ve only read the first chapter, I feel there will be a lot of dramas and twists. There are great imagery in it, and speaking from the character’s POV is a great way to tell a story like this. You use a lot of description which is great because that makes readers feel as if they are there 👍! It truly is a great start, I will continue reading it, I enjoy reading about interracial couples. I, myself have a book on that. But, it’s not about me right now! Anyways, continue writing great books like these, and I hope you have much success!!! Again, great job!!! Edit: (I forgot to write this but I also gave you a four stars on grammar because there are a few grammatical errors, but no matter. I’m sure you will improve with time!!! I’m also working on that too, but anyways, good job!)

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Very Interesting!

I read this book very carefully, and I took time to read it. I love this book already, and I have many questions on my mind. Will she give Anike the letter? What will happen afterwards? Why is she not close with her own mother? It’s very interesting. Moreover, your vocabulary and spelling are great. I enjoyed reading your book, and I love giving out my honest opinions on them to also help my fellow authors! Keep up the good work!!

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NOT THE DAD! 😧

This is actually great! There are absolutely no grammatical errors and the plot is very clear. I love the suspense! If you want to be an famous author, I hope your dream comes true because your stories are really great. You should get more recognition! Great job!!!

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I’m Hooked!

I feel this story will be very interesting. There are some grammatical errors but now many, it’s still great. I wonder who was taken from her. What are her powers, whats Hades’ deal and many other questions. Keep up the good work, author!!

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