Inkitt
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Love it so far...

"It's a great plot! However, there are quite a few grammar mistakes. You're writing style is a little hard to follow because you switch between past and present tense, but I'm intrigued! I will definitely keep reading this story as you continue to update it! Nice job."

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  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation