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The Promise

"This story very interesting with mystery and love"

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The Promise

"Beautiful love story .I love the setting , character portrayal ,plot and storyline . Well done ! Hope to read more of your novels .👌👏👍🏼"

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Short and Sweet

"A short and sweet book. this tale was enchanting and fun to read. While there could have been more development of the characters, the message was clear and it was written pretty well. Delilah's encounters with Jake, Rhys and Alex were all uniquely engaging and contributed well to the picturesque landscape of life on the farm no matter how luxurious it may have been. It is clear this author enjoys painting pictures for her readers and she has done just that. Well done author."

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Wonderful plot .. with an unexpected twist..

"Though the story is short... It is not lacking... And the twist is... I don't have words... Just a wonderful story..."

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A Beautiful Story

"I read this in one sitting, then went back in to reread because I thoroughly enjoyed it, the ending most of all. I loved Archy's humor in the beginning, and for such a short appearance, his remark to Lilah about 'the dogs won't bite either, useless creatures, was so good, and it stuck. From the moment Rhys came into the picture, I fell in love with him. I loved how he and Lilah had this easy connection that just happened, you know. The type that you don't realize has blossomed into something more until, well, I'm no spoiler. Gosh, I couldn't get enough of it, it's such a fantastic short read, and I marvel at how the author's able to tell such a refined tale in only 9 chapters! I loved the writing style, the progression of the plot, the mix-up with her intended and the amazing twist in the end. The setting was well done, descriptive and lighthearted with the humor. And that ending, with the couple's sizzling 'let's put a pin in this for now' entanglement, just excellent writing. Great story, and fantastic writing."

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Love it!

"I’m already in love with this book and can not wait to read more!!! "

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A Great Short Story!

"This story is a five star across all boards. It’s so romantic and unexpected that it makes you smile. It’s a beautiful love story that must be read! The characters are so lovable and the author is out of this world! "

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Roadmap Awards Review

"A Princess Diaries-esque love trope, The Promise follows Delilah, a young woman struggling through the aftermath of losing her family, as she travels to England to fulfill a betrothal made before her father’s death. While the story isn’t fleshed out to its potential, angstyjane still delivers an enjoyable read with a feel-good twist at the end that shows her promise as a writer. A quick enjoyable read I would recommend to any fans of light YA romance."

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