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Great story

"I really enjoyed this story. It is well written and a gripping read. I really liked the pace of the story and the depths of the characters and their interactions. "

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Kingdoms

"Really enjoyed this story . "

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Kingdoms

"I enjoyed the book! VERY imaginative, however also somewhat confusing when you don't know who is talking or thinking ⁉️ Overall a good romantic adventure story"

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Kingdoms

"Interesting story at times hard to follow. Enjoyed the intriguing plot. Definitely a different type of story. Lots of twists and turns"

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Good Beginning

"The beginning so far of this is pretty good. Dives right in while giving the right amount of detail and being told at a good pace so far. Only thing I might recommend is go back and look at each time you say shift because it looks like the word shirt would work better there. Besides that, very good."

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