What is your opinion?
Time Tamer
"Roberts writes superbly well! Her imagination is an ode to fantasy, and I cannot stress more how good of a writer and storyteller she is. Little suggestion, perhaps narrow down the number of characters introduced at the beginning. It is a huge family you have there, and the words building around and its magic are already so intricate that it would be a shame to lose a reader in there. (He or she or they would love it, of course, but would he ever come out of it? :p) It is one of the best books I have ever read on Inkitt."
The Time Tamer
"I have always loved reading a fantasy genre and this is just like another book I would read for almost 3 times. The fact that I was learning and discovering about new mythical creatures simply wowed me. The story flow was smooth same as the grammar & punctuation. This is just my personal opinion, but I'm not really into serious narrative. However, since your story isn't super serious like I thought it would be, I honestly enjoyed it! I may not like the fact that Alam is kinda like a drunkard, a smoker and someone who probably looks down on women but I like that his intention about finding his disappeared father is very strong, stronger than anything. Also, I find it cute that Alvord's character reminds me of the singer named Tiffany Alvord. Anyways, thanks for writing such an amazing and interesting book! Loveeeeeee youuuuuu and byeeeeeeeeeee 🤗💞✨ -Kookie 🍪💕"
What a gripping chapter!
"I just love the way the narrative constructs and how the unexpected emerges. Not to mention little Dalya who keeps marveling us. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! Thank you."
A supernatural yarn with potential
"This story is very early in the stages...but hoping a positive review will give the author the extra push to continue. If you like time travel, suspense and horror mixed in with a thriller/mystery....this is for you. Hope there is more to come. "
Loads of Mystery!
"It's only the first three chapters of the story, but you did a great job by getting me hooked. I love it! It's wondrous, creative, well-composed, and the perfect amount of narration, description, and dialogue. The way you introduce your characters in the most bizarre settings, the twists you put in their ways, and the world of the story are so well-done. I mean, a fantasy story might focus on one thing, but yours gives a broader image. You created a fantasy world with precise details, merged it with telepathy, time-travelling, and parallel worlds, and added a mysterious plot and BAM! look what you've got! Also, the way you weave between these parts of your world is so smooth. I believe it's those who write fantasy and scifi who are creative. I mean, I write romance, and I don't think I'll ever think of such a world, not even in my dreams. It's really intriguing and I can't wait to know what happened to Bessa, and the secret of Alam's father. Technically, everything looks perfect, but there're few grammatic mistakes that can be easily spotted. I can spot them for you if you like. Also, I have a question: please explain the grammar of as+ verb-ing. I saw some examples with the verb perceive, but I don't understand using it.! Everything seems awesome, and you're doing a great job! Looking forward for more! :D"
Time Tamer
"Great read so far! Looking forward to the updates❤❤❤"
GEA review!
"I had a lot of fun reading through this story. I think it's biggest strength is the plot and the world is takes place in. There is so much creativity and love put into this story and it shows, and I so enjoyed learning more about this world as the story progressed. The plot is layered and interesting, and it keeps me on my toes throughout, especially with all the characters, but I didn't have any trouble keeping track of who was who or what each character was doing, so hats off to you for that! I think your writing style is good and flows nice, and with a few tweaks it will really bring things to the next level for you. Same could be said for the grammar. You have a solid foundation and overall good grammar, and with a few more edits you'll be golden. Overall, I really enjoyed my time in this world and I'd highly recommend this story to any fan of fantasy or just a great story! Well done :)"
The Time Tamer
"Review through the first five chapters. "The Time Tamer" is a fantastical story about Alam who can jump between different worlds, a special individual in his universe. He seems to be a rather serious character, breaking government law alongside his roommate Aluvard, though Alam's plagued by dreams of his past. Humans live alongside creatures like gargoyles and shifters, sometimes succumbing to the dark side of it as well. There's a lot of vivid detail mixed in to help develop this world A.E. Roberts has created and it all makes one want to find out more, uncover more about it. The blurb itself introduces so much that entices one to see how it all unfolds. There's some things that need to be fixed, already sent to the author, but even with that there's still an intruiging story there. A strong recommendation to those who love fantasy and time-travel. "
