The Parvenu

"You have set up an intriguing story here. I like the idea of the matriarchy, and the women controlling their men. I also like the relationship between Kayin and his future wife, but I presume they won't be getting married now that Kayin is a crown prince? There is clearly a lot of injustice in this kingdom, killing of Kayin's aunt, and the other girls parents, the fact that people are starving because of the war. I hope that Kayin eventually is able to bring justice to the kingdom, keep up the great work, Sofia"