Inkitt
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Great book

"Really enjoyed your book great characters intense plot twist and turns on the story really enjoyed thank you 🤩 "

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"Bloody fantastic...x"

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The Hybrid

"Not the usual story but I liked it a lot, the plot was fab and flowed well, along with the curveballs that we weren’t expecting, the characters were a good match, cut up about Alex but Sam was a rock even though he knew her heart initially belonged to another. Great story looking forward to your oncoming stories :) "

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The Hybrid

"Awesome book loved'it 🤗👍"

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The hybrid

"The story was really good, I did feel for poor Ellie. Alex could have lived that was really mean to kill him off "

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The Hybrid

"Really good book and really hopevthere will be a second one were Ellie has pups etc"

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The hybrid

"Great job author. I love the plot and the twist and turns of this book"

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Love it

"I liked everything in this book. The way you write, the characters, the story..."

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Thr Hybrid

"Great story! I just wish Alex was alive but then it would really be difficult to have both men. It is either you lose one and have one. "

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Loved it

"It was an amazing story Perfect how it ended"

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The Hybrid

"Absolutely loved this story! Lots of grammar and spelling errors but really enjoyed the plot of it."

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Are you kidding?

"Liked the story. Extremely upset at the ending with so much more to go!!!"

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The Hybrid

"I gave the plot 3 stars because I’m not entirely sure how I feel about it. The heroine comes across as a scared teenager that wants to be a badass. She’s actually in her 20’s. I like the overall concept but there is a lack in the execution. I do like the author’s overall writing style."

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Ellie

"Pretty goodood book 🙂 but you should work on your grammar..."

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The Hybrid

"Great story. "

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The Hybrid

"I really loved this book however the ending left too many unanswered questions. Like why did he say he killed her mother but she was alive and why she was acting strange. Needed more interaction between her and Sam and did she ever receive a wolf. These are some of the things that could be expanded upon "

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Interesting plot

"The story has a good plot but the shift and introducing a mate so late in the story has not set well. Also, English is not the authors first language and they used words that are not correct, although the intention makes it so reader can still understand. If I were not traveling, would not bother finish reading. "

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General idea of the story was good

"The general idea of the story was good and portrayal of the characters were mostly consistent. Many areas for improvement as this has great potential: Proofreading. It seems evident that the author is a non-native English speaker so hats off to writing a whole story with such a diverse vocabulary! But I would recommend either proofreading it yourself or finding a fluent friend or even a reader Portrayal of emotions. There is a strong focus on 'I feel this because of this' in the writing style. Personally, I think things should be stated as they are. Don't just tell us the story, show us - it's not a recount in her shoes. Let the readers draw our own conclusions on why it happened. It would help us feel for the characters more. There's great potential for an emotional tug in this story, but I think more time needs to be placed in focusing on it Great job. Keep at it!"

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