What is your opinion?
Great book
"Brilliant absolutely brilliant can't wait for sequal. Amazingly astonishing Awesome writing would have loved a little romance"
Darkness falls
"I like the whole thing and I would recommend this to my sisters and family and friends"
AWESOME
"This book is so captivating and interesting that i can't stop reading would 10/10 recommend to anyone who enjoys the thrills of fantasy lands"
Don't read
"Pls make more"
Please write a continuation or sequel!!!
"This book is amazing and I think everyone should give it a try. But why does the story end there? I would like to know why her magic is so weird, what happens between her and Calic and hoa she overall deals being a skydancer! Please write more! "
Wow...
"I have never been so hooked to a book in my life. This is such an amazing book and I really want it to be continued. It’s sooooo good ❤️"
Please continue!
"This story is so good! I read it all as soon as I opened it. I really hope you continue Ivy's journey and add a first mission and maybe have your main plot to be getting the man in the red cape and black eyes or something... I was hooked and it would be great if you continued it"
very interesting world you created
"The story was quite interesting, I enjoyed you character development, and the introduction of new characters went well. I was disappointed - the story ended too soon. I look forward to reading the rest of the story - finish it soon!!!!"
A brilliant journey
"I'll keep this reasonably short, but full of praise. I was drawn from the moment I read the first page? I wouldn't say page but you know. Your writing style dances like a melody, the subtle but succulent descriptions of both character and setting place me into your world. Excited for more and all the best in the world of writing :) "
A pleasure to read
"Wow, what a ride! I enjoyed this story from beginning to end, between the girl that needs to know what to do with her life to the strange dream to the mysterious man in the red cape. It builds throughout with a constant feeling of "something isn't quite right here". The writing itself carries the reader through quickly, but it is also very thorough. I love the picture of character and setting that you paint with just a few concise sentences. I think you in a lot of places you do a great job of showing rather than telling. The ending of the chapter left me wanting more. I can't wait to see what happens next! There's so many different questions that you tactfully slip into the reader's mind. I'm excited to see where this goes. I thought that you dealt with the intensity of the chase scene very well, although I wondered why the main character didn't know that the "bird" (and this is just my assumption) was a dragon. It just seems really unlikely that she wouldn't know that. I thought that the writing was especially good when she was standing near the creek and photographing. Okay, I'd better stop because I'm starting to ramble. Anyway, I liked this a lot, and I hope this helps. Great work!"
Good book, would recommend
"I like this story. I'd prefer more details. More introspection from the mail charecter. Everything is unfolding so fast, but how does Ivey feel about it? She seems to be fine even though, like 2 days ago her brother was murdered in front of her. But the story itself is great. And I love the mix of shuttle humor and the charecters are expressive and diverse in personality."
Darkness falls
"Interesting idea to violently though remorselessly throw the heroin to this new world and making me urge to see more."
MORE!
"This is wonderful! The word-building is awesome and character of Storm is intriguing. I hope the author can continue. God bless and more power! ❤"
So far so good
"Strong start. I hope it stays good. :)"
Brilliant YA fun
"How did Stephen King put it? Unputdownable. Despite its flaws (which I shall attempt to be constructive with later) it's not something I could stop reading. Ivy, as a protagonist, is incredibly relatable and what I've seen of her character arc in self-discovery is engaging and entertaining. I absolutely adore the chemistry she has with Storm, it's probably my favourite part of the book. And yes, he always deserves it. The characters are all interesting and engaging, and characterisation marches at a good pace, though I feel that individual character arcs could be made a little clearer. I don't know if it's an issue of slow pacing or not, but I feel right now as if this is a directionless story holding on to interest through world-building alone. I see the foreshadowing (slight though it is) and obviously this is going somewhere, but at the moment it feels as if any actual plot is being held at a standstill. Now, obviously Ivy needs to learn and her character arc is very important, but whilst incredibly interesting I feel as if the story, thus far, lacks real excitement aside from the events of part one. As far as your style goes, I can't criticise you at all. The writing flows like music, gliding between sentences, and I can't help but be drawn in to this ridiculously interesting world which you've created. The main flaw I found early on was Ivy's lack of a central motivation, something I see as vital to a protagonist, but as being directionless turns in to finally answering the call good and proper, I find myself not caring. Overall, you'll find many books better, but none are like this. The author has carved out her own style and created a world you find yourself lost in. I hope that this does, one day, get published, and I look forward to reading future instalments. Final note, a cheeky plug, if you're reading this then may I recommend my own fantasy novel, Cursed, an urban fantasy I'm sure is enjoyable (but then, I would be, I wrote it xD)"
Darkness Falls
"Darkness Falls was a good story. It kept me hooked and reading until the end. There were a few grammar and spelling errors and the story itself could use some further development and "fleshing out", but overall it was a good story. Definitely a Young Adult novel that I'm sure many will enjoy."
Darkness falls
"Were is the rest of the story im intrigued by it "
