What is your opinion?
"Peter Pan Among the Shadows"
"Who cannot love the story of Peter Pan and his escapades? Well written, fun, adventurous and creative perspective of the original story. This rendition is excellent and a compliment to this Author..........Writing skills are excellent, grammar and punctuation perfect, even with the Pirate inflections, the plot and Story very well executed...........fine work...... william elliott go to; https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive......Abstract writing of the presence of Dead and life..................please review .......thank you."
Lovin' It!
"I'm a huge fan of Peter pan. Ever since I read Peter and the Starcatchers, along with all the others, by Dave Barry and Ridley Pearson, he's been one of my favorite fantasy characters. Seeing his name here made me leap at a chance for a new perspective. I began to read, and was filled with awe at Zachs talent to write. It is beautifully written, with the talents of a NYT Bestseller! Though, you'd have to get this published with Disney Hyperion... I thought that you rocked at bringing this story to life. We writers can all imagine our worlds, but only a few of us can bring it forwards in the best words."
A Flight to Neverland You Will "Never" Want To Miss!
"Loving the story of Peter Pan, I thoroughly enjoyed having read this new and fresh perspective on the flight to Never-land. The plot was well written and the characters' colours were woven nicely to paint a magnificent literary portrait. I truly love how the author integrated all of these factors into this escape from reality that I truly needed. I also loved the technical writing style as it fits very well with the geographical setting of the story. Overall, a great author knows their passion, their story which they wish to convey, what their audience craves, and delivers. That delivery was spot on in my personal, humble, and professional opinion. This novel is suitable for many audiences of various ages. I highly recommend this work and this is a flight to Never-land you will not want to miss!"
Excellent!
"Reading this has been so enjoyable. Peter Pan, the Lost Boys and Neverland have always been part of many children's lives. This work has just provided a fresh take on them. I loved how the characters' thoughts and emotions were given life in this wonderfully crafted narrative. I just couldn't stop scrolling until the end. Top marks, Zach."
Samih
"wow it was a very nice story... I know several people on here who would be willing to give an in depth review. NOTE: They might not give you all nice feedback, but that will make you stronger. I highly recommend "Someone". "Someone" (a username) gives very in-depth reviews, and once you edit your story and feel confident about it, I'd recommend seeing what someone else thinks. :) 3.) Interview your characters. Basically, come up with a list of questions, some of which you would ask people when you make friends or what you would find on a profile of sorts online. Favorite color? Secret hobbies? Favorite sport? Food they love to crave? etc. This will really help you get to know the characters that you're writing, and you can use these things to help build depth to them in your story. OVERALL: I think this is an interesting story that has potential. Don't forget that. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I hope this helped you. :"
