This story contains themes of: stalker, torture
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“Lay off me!” I almost yelled. “Jeez, are you always this unbelievable?” Bennett asked, upset. I thought for a second there that I saw his eyes flashing. Or was it just the street light? At any rate, he didn’t wait for me to answer before he mumbled to himself softly while shaking his head. “Of course, you are. You’re bloody Matthews...” When Gemma's father loses his job due to a surgery gone wrong, her family moves to Upton Hill Town. There she finds herself struggling with wild nature, school politics and a pair of infuriating, cyan blue eyes...
Hi and welcome to Shifted.
Just so you know, this is a second, revised version of the story with changes to the plot and different ending.
To those who enjoyed the first draft - thank you all for reading and commenting. This led me here. If you're back, hopefully, you'll find your answers and enjoy the new ending.
To all those who only picked the story up - have a nice ride.
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Christina: I love that the FL is intelligent, purposeful, kind, and thoughtfull. She protects herself and others without compromising her morals or diminishing her values.Great character development showing their growth.
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Jkind12: Great story but I didn’t like the gap of 4 years in the end! It’s like the writer quit.!
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karenfancp: I have noticed a few typos, the story line is good. I can’t put this down.
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ktkirata: The story is really interesting. How the character described in the story is like you can see them and picture how they move, talk and feel in the every plots. Well done writer and keep it up.
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NN: It got me from chapter 1. I’m sad it ended, but I loved the whole story. It was very emotional to read parts of it, and the dynamics, characters, and plot twists were amazing. I’d like to have an epilogue... 10years from now. What happened to Dewey? Even Jordan hahahaha
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Ankica: I like everything, recommend to my friends, plot is interesting, main female character is great
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wndymns08: I like the shorter chapters
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