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Aberrant
"Your writing is fantastic Michael! I can really feel the women fear when they're trapped in the 'Let Us Help' prison. It was almost difficult for me to read, as you made the rape scenes feel so realistic. I like the idea of the two mains knowing each other from dreams, like soulmates. It's a commonly used trope, but it's very well used here. Keep up your amazing work, Sofia"
Nothing close to realistic
"Seems like it's written by a teenager. Bad Grammer you never know which characters are speaking sometimes 2 people are meshed together. Couldn't get past the fourth chapter it was not good."
