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cute
"it really was a cute little story. your writing skills are really good. i loved how it started with a casual conversation very naturally. i liked the concept of the story. it was fun reading it."
Colours
"Wonderful story! Well written and well executed. A familiar trope with familiar people that left me feeling warm and happy inside. My only critique is that the paragraphs can get a little long at times. There's a lot of information put together, and it would be nice to see it being broken up! All in all, good job! I look forward to reading more of your work! borahae <3"
