Destined to Meet
Hello! I hope you will take all my feedback with a grain of salt, and only make the changes that you feel comfortable making!
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Firstly, the reason why I gave the plot 3 stars is because I think the plot of the story is not the most unique. This story feels a little cliched and stereotypical, which is in itself not too bad, but the execution of these familiar tropes lacks nuance and style. Bringing in some special twists and turns could make your story stand out, and make your plot a lot more interesting.
Secondly, I think your writing style is pretty solid. It's easy to read and understand, and provides details of your story with good clarity. One thing that you could stand to work on is dialogue, as your character's dialogues and interactions can feel quite stilted and awkward at times. Working on making them more natural could add more fluency to the general progression of your story.
Another thing to consider would be your paragraphs. While I do understand that you have paragraphs, it would be good to leave a line in between each paragraph to make your story simpler to read. There are a few spelling errors here and there, but those can be easily remedied.
I noticed that the main character's name has changed from Amaryllis Whiper to Amaryllis Shaw somewhere in the novel. I'm not sure if it was intentional, but I'm pointing it out in case it is a mistake!
All in all, your story has good potential! I hope you continue to work on it, and always try to improve your writing. Best of luck!
Ps, your book cover is super cute. Love!