What is your opinion?
love it!
"love this story cant wait to read more "
Gravel Ghost
"Payton, is one of five children adopted as toddlers and trained as killer assassins. Although Paton, hates what she does, She has no choice but to do as she's told. On a weekend when her parents are gone, she meets Connor, who tells her she does have a choice. But what if her hundredth job assignment was to assonate a man in Chile, and what if the man was her boyfriend's father?"
Love it
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Well done
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Good read
"The idea is great and it keeps you wanting to read until the end. But it does need some improvement. I would suggest to work on the writing and grammar of this story. If fixed and polished, it could be a great one."
Gravel Ghost
"My thoughts are: when you enter a book in a contest it should be beta tested and polished, The word assassinate is misspelled right away. So instead of reading the book and getting lost in the story, I am focusing on errors. With that being said, the story has a good plot and a good pace."
ok one
"Good plot..nothing very special though.He does Mangeshkar to keep my interest going through out so that's a good thing.Good book overall with scope of improvement always there.A girl who doesn't have interest in being an assassin,and us trained to be one. A father who loves his daughters,but doesn't expresses it until forced to , a materialistic mother, and a guy madly in love. and the drama that comes with it. that's what this story is all abt."
