Inkitt
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Really good

"I love the complex storytelling and the general world you’ve built. Lots of potential for very interesting spin-offs. Maybe for Volante? 👀 overall, well written and worthwhile. Thank you 😊 "

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Hotel lamia

"This story has a great plot. I believe it could be expanded, with more details and information as at times it glossed over pieces of the story that can give us more information. I knew Ambrose was Jenny's sole mate from the way Jenny describes everything. More about the orphanage and her youth could also help. I'd love to see a second book to this. Do they find out what happened to Jenny as an infant? What's so special about her soul? But overall a good story. Thanks"

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Hotel Laima

"Utterly Delightful and Captivating Story I Gladly Recommend to Any and All who are 18 or over ♡ Eagerly Waiting for any other stories Jeayness wishes to Create for our Enjoyment ♡ 🥰😍💖💖💖"

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HOTEL LAMIA

"Simply the best♥️♥️♥️"

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Hotel Lamina

"We have a strong female lead who isn’t a damsel in distress, and a relationship based on more than just a bond Super awesome story 10/10!!"

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Never cease to amaze

"Amazing Amazing Amazing!!!"

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Hotel Lamia

"Amazing read!! Excellent I loved it!!"

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Well written

"I enjoyed every bit of it....... Great work author ❣️❣️"

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Unique

"Absolutely beautiful story. Unique plot. Amazing character development. Intriguing. Interesting and very entertaining. Love it!!! "

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Hotel Lamia

"I'm not that big on the sex but, the story overall was terrific. I found your plot was unique. I look forward to reading more of your work.🌹"

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Hotel Lamia

"Really imaginative storyline about supernatural beings, I STILL haven't figured out what Jenny is though ⁉️love your writing BTW 🌹🌹!! ❤️ and ✝️🛐 s "

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Hotel Lamia

"Awesome story and great plot. Loved it, thank you for writing it and sharing"

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Interesting

"Love this book,the suspense is over rated "

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Awesome read

"Very well written. Good pace interesting chatacters"

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Loved this book

"Loved this book so much that didn’t out dow till finished it. Loved the plot and characters "

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Hotel Lamia

"I love it.. "

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Hotel Lamia

"I love this book ... "

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Hotel Lamia

"Loved this excellent story. Intrigue,suspense and true soul searching love"

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Hotel lamia

"I really enjoyed this story, it’s extremely captivating "

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Loved it

"Wow, drew me in and i had to avoid housework 😇😈to get it finished post haste. Kudos to you 😎👏"

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