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Great

"The supporting characters in this are just as well drawn as the leads. Nobody feels like a prop. Everyone has weight and purpose and their own thing going on."

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Kept me hooked😘

"Beautiful writing and your craft at going between the realms was masterful... I thoroughly enjoyed this story of love finding it's way through past lives and realms for the soul mates to be together again 😘 Thank you for a beautiful story that I couldn't put down💜"

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past life/ fated lovers

"Fantasy meets modern times. A beautiful story were a past life is reincarnated in modern times and dragged back to her destined partner. There are twist, turns, and magical moments. Check it out totally recommended!"

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Unique ❤️❤️❤️

"A very unique concept and interesting story. Have been a devoted reader for quite some time now, and I must say our author has never disappointed me. As usual I totally enjoyed reading this book as well. Can't wait for the second book on Betz. "

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King Of The Winter Forest

"Awesome cliffhanger!! The tension…"

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Purity

"I like the story very much on the first i amazed of a story where fantastic but in the end i found true love of a family and a truly love of somenone it fells me realistic and unbelienvable that to jappen now in our days..it is impossible to be with the family without arguing , chaos , and disrespectful you know..but over all the has humbleness patience u derstanding love and purity.to the author keep wrting story that people can relate and feel"

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King of winter forest

"Absolutely incredible book completely loved it can't wait to read book 2 💕❤️💕❤️💕❤️💕❤️"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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King of the winter forest

"Love this book the story line and discription very welll written. Inlove love love love 😍😍😍😍😍🫶. 10 out of 10!!!!"

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King of the winter forest

"Great start so far! Can't wait to read the rest of this book! "

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King of the winter forest

"Like 👍 the book but wished it was complete tho"

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Excellent story

"This story is so interesting I just couldn't stop reading "

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Beautiful Book

"The Author is one incredible writer with a unique ability to share her Beautiful imagination to The readers heart. .S.T You are Awesome.Thank You "

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King of the forest winter

"A nice plot that makes one desire to read more.Keep up the spirit Writer!Good work"

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💕💕

"Just waiting for the updates!! 😻 Plz complete this awesome novel sooonnn!!"

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Good read

"Good story, I wished the main character would knock her co worker out."

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Love how it started!

"Truly like how it started and where this story is going. I’ll be waiting for the updates! 🤩🤩🤩😘"

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Good plot. Needs minor fixes.

"The plot is very catchy but at some places it loses connection to the original story. The switching between POVs of characters is rather abrupt. A round of applause for author's imagination. I love how Viviane grows into a strong independent woman unlike cowering helpless princesses in most stories who need a guy to save them. Was hoping for a little more steamy scenes though. Good work."

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Riveting

"I liked the storyline. It was different but interesting. The end felt a bit rushed, like important information was left out. I wish we could have had more insight to how the deals were made. And why it took so long. Altogether a nice read. "

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King of winter forest

"Can’t wait for betz story. U are a talented author love all your books keep it up.I was afraid for a while that vivi won’t av a happy ending,but u did it without disappointment"

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