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POETRY

"I love the second poem very much... Chase I was searching something that related my life. The same thing happened with my friends... I love this poem book Overall; Love it -Sanu-"

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Poems of The Lost Eve by Ambrose Blackadr

"I love reading poetry but don't get to as much as I like but I enjoyed your poems. They were full of emotion and felt honest to me. You have a lot of potential and I think with practice and as you gain experience, if you want to, you can be even more awesome. Good Job!"

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Poems of the lost eve

"Poetry is difficult to write and I think it takes a brave person to share it with all to see. Very well done, I would love to see more 😉❤"

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Strong Intentions

"As someone who writes poetry, I can tell there are very strong, unfiltered emotions that are driving your words. Your intention is easily put across. Here are some things you could work on: 1. Formatting: In comparison to prose, poetry looks like a skeleton on the page. It does not look very full. That is why it's important to 'aesthetically' format it. Be very conscious of where you use upper case, lower case. Of when you switch between them, or when you're consistent. Things like line changing, punctuation etc can play a huge role too. Try to play around with them more. 2. Figures of Speech: I'm not saying that all poets should use metaphors, but it would help you grow as a writer if you tried to get more complex and creative with the way you use words. Good effort, keep writing!"

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