Well Edited and Unpredictable
[I read several of the chapters in the beginning]
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I was very pleased to see how realistic the scenes were, especially the one where she wasn't able to climb up the rope at her first try. I was expecting her to push through, because it's a story, but it made more sense for her to fail. It's great how the author doesn't romanticize the problematic erotica. I just wish we could have more paragraphs about how the protagonist felt, not just what she was thinking. The writing style is well developed and well edited, but I feel like it lacks a spark in a few places. But it's still satisfactory.
Anyway, I have no idea where the plot is going to go next, and that's always a good sign.
(Also the first scene of this novel was perfectly done!)