What is your opinion?
Good read
"Overall, I enjoyed this story. The characters each had their own personalities for good development. It had a good flow and the pace was a good clip. There were some small technical issues like grammar, some misspellings, mismatched names, and the quotation marks tended to not always be around dialogue. I had mixed feelings about the differing points of view, but because they were separated the way they were, there wasn't any confusion. I would also suggest a brief description of the main characters closer to the beginning. They did come later, but until then, we were left to guess for the most part."
Coming Together by Afroluv
"- I love this story, devolopment, characters - changing POV made the story more interesting and understandable"
Coming together
"The pacing was completely messed up and POV would randomly switch, scenes would go in and out with out descriptions. Overall confusing."
