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Why Would U Want Me?

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Summary

"I'm confused, I already told you I hate you! Why do you keep bothering me?" He pushes up against me bringing his face close, very close. Centimeters from mine, so I could smell his minty breath. Looking into my light brown eyes he says, "Because I always get what I want Love. Venessa Goodwin is exactly like her name, good. Always working and studying. She has her whole life already planned out. As a fifteen year old senior, she has accomplished many great achievements. But, what happens when a baby is brought into the picture and she finds out hidden secrets about the mafia. With a possessive boy following her, what's a not so ordinary fifteen year old girl to do? Find out in "Why Would U Want Me?"

Status
Complete
Chapters
24
Rating
4.5 (21 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

Intro

Sooo, I’m new at this story writing thing so just ignore any typos :)! I don’t even know what I’m doing, but I really wanted to try and write my own story so hope you enjoy! P.S. this story is just for fun!

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