Misty Anne Neslen

West Jordan

I dream incredible, follow my dreams and create my own fantasies...

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Good Work!

Good effort but there are some things which can be improved, I take it this is a short story... the characters are very well thought out but I would have liked some more details about what was going on around them and more detail on what ultimately led up to that final battle. The ending was classic and of course good job. You've got talent... keep up the good work, and most importantly keep writing!

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I am loving this book!!!

I am loving this story, the characters are so deliciously opposite it’s entertaining. I want more… it’s got me not wanting to put down my phone

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