The Unbidden: The First Tome

Cynical Optimist : You can never go wrong with a B. E. Harmel story.The plot is intriguing and the protagonists are mature and sensible.I was a little disappointed with the stylized writing. Harmel, a gifted storyteller easily draws the reader in by creating characters thatbwe can connect with emotionally. Hwre, she...

Ashley: I enjoyed the story. It was a short one so the fast pace fit. I think something should be put in to show a time jump between paragraphs like a "****" just to make it easier to follow when we skip to the next day week or month. Over all a good read.

Cynical Optimist : I devoured this story. There isn't much to say that hasn't been said already.This is a wonderful feel-good read.

Fiona Walker: I actually really enjoyed this fast paced story.

Pepjuice: I love how her partner was so supportive and loving. He listened to her and they both communicated. I didn't like how her old pack treated her but the positive growth she gained.

lunaartsoul___: I loved the way your story unfolds. The emotional depth and structure made it feel very engaging, almost cinematic at times.I’m someone who enjoys both reading and visual storytelling, and your work really stood out to me. If you’re open to chatting about creative ideas someday, I’d love that.

kenshop: Love this story. It’s fast paced and hard to put down. I just want to see what happens next. Wow so good...

Wendy Salvo: I really liked this story but now that I’ve read all three I wanted to come back with a thought, the forward on this story talks about a reverse harem and not having to choose, but there isn’t any choice, or thought of a harem until the moment she connects with them, there is only foreshadowing of o...

starlit_soul: I love the plot and dialogue It's my first ware wolf story and I can already see my self reading more of these