What is your opinion?
Review
"OK, so the start was creepy yet incredible. I like the way you made dialogues and your word count is also progressive. I mean its really hard for me to write a chapter with 1000 words. The story was really different then most of books directed to the plot. Its great and the cover looks like adventure I mean if you play PS4 there is this game called Uncharted 4 . I like the way its person. Tw can you review my book Imperfect Sides since its part if our review swap. "
The Arcane Order
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Silly and funny
"I think this book is silly and fun. I enjoyed it, and the talking turtle. I also like the Percy Jackson mixed with the pirates and the Caribbean feel."
Very compelling!
"So far, this reminds me a lot of Rick Riordan's writing in terms of your character voice and chapter titles, which I love! It helps your story feel unique and engaging and keeps the readers on their toes, so great job with that. I love the concept of your story and I can't wait to see where you take it from here - I think you have something really special here! My only critique would be in your writing style and how to immerse your reader into the story. The one instance that sticks out in my mind was when you compared the cabin from the beginning to a captains cabin from Pirates of the Caribbean. You absolutely can do that - I know I make comparisons like that all the time - but what about the cabin makes you draw that comparison? What does it look like? What does it smell like? Is there décor on the walls? Play around with adding details like that, it can help immerse your reader even more. :) Overall I'm excited to see where this goes and I thoroughly enjoyed reading through this! Great job :)"
Amazing!
"This book so far has a lot of character! It is unique and I love the authors writing style. It doesn't fit the typical story telling style and I love it! The characters are so fleshed out and they stay within the persona they are given. It is a very strong Start! Some of the paragraphs are really long, especially in the chapter that explains the background. However, it really doesn't take away from the story! I am really excited to see where this goes! "
Unique
"Talking tortoise, the first thing that attracted my attention. The story moved smoothly and I love pirates of the Carribbean. I always wanted to read a story about pirates but never found one but I think I have one now.."
The Arcane Order
"The premise of the story has me very intrigued, I mean it's not everyday somebody gets kidnapped by a huge turtle. I like your writing style and the chapters were engaging and made me want to read on. I look forward to more chapters being released."
Arcane
"This was really good. There were a bunch of punctuation/capitalization errors, but good story overall."
Amazing meet of Pirates of the Carribean with Percy Jackson
"Incredible how this book blends Rick Riordan style humour with pirates replacing Greek mythology. The characters are super pertinent to the plot and amusing at the same time. A little bit of editing would improve the quality, but the errors don't deter the extent of entertainment this book brings with itself!"
Seems good
"I want to read this, i like mysterious story. Okay... Will see how the story improve..."
