Peace(slow)

Interesting

So much time has passed since I read a nice book. I really love to explore gems in new books and authors and this is one of them. I lov your descriptions but I don't understand why are you inserting a line after every paragraph. Is it to show the intervals between time?
I really wanna know more!
Keep writing!

Short but sweet

It was short story but I enjoyed it. I like the cover. The book still needs some work but still it was sweet. Their are many questions left but its fine. I enjoyed it!

Great till now

I like your story and by summary one can understand the plot. I always love stories about reincarnation and past memories.
The paragraphs were a bit long. That's all and everything else was great!
KEEP WRITNG!!!

Deserve

I like the way you first described the characters. The cover is perfect. The paragraphs are too long and did break the flow. Try to make it short. For dialogues, try to write them in new line. To many quotations confused me a lot. I had to read it all over again.
For grammatical mistakes, use an app.
I suggest grammarly.
Keep writing!

Honest review

I like the story idea, the book is still in it's early stage so I won't comment on the plot.
The writing was a bit off. It confused me a lot. First you are writing a narrative way and then suddenly changes to descriptive.
Please try to stick to one way.
There are grammatical mistakes and needs to be corrected. I suggest using an app for it.
Keep writing!

😱😱😱

Dude it's amazing! Update soon!

Wow!!!

The stories are amazing!
They give me an inner satisfaction and peace of mind. Your book can really help others!
Keep writing and try to reach more people!

Nice...

I liked the summary. It is the thing which made me read further.
I think from which I was drawn back is the cover. The cover and the name doesn't go hand-in-hand. The cover and name of the story are the most important thing to attract readers. Imagine visiting a book shop and looking for a book to read. The first thing that you will notice is the cover and then the name and then the summary.
Keep writing!

Great!!

I have loved it so far. When you make your own world it is important to fill he loop holes or to not leave any. You done a great job at this part.
Keep writing!

Lil Summer

It is interesting since the first chapter. Revealing the characters in next chapter is a very good idea. It makes your readers engaged. I love the plot and the way you describe every feeling!
Keep up the good work!

Abyss

The plot is unique. I have read many books but none of them had an interesting plot as this book.
The book can sure make a hit. The grammar and the description is perfect.

Tainted Snow

It is hard to comment on a book on its early stage but this book is for sure a hit. The character and the mysteries are well defined. Still there are some things which needs to be explained hope that the author will explain those things in next chapters..

Unique

Talking tortoise, the first thing that attracted my attention. The story moved smoothly and I love pirates of the Carribbean. I always wanted to read a story about pirates but never found one but I think I have one now..

Nice!!

First, a person from 2020 will not easily believe anyone specially who says that hey are demigod or something.
Secondly, you could have added more details but the overall story was good.

Fighting!!

It was really awesome. I usually watch horror movies only because of the graphics but I really loved the way you described everything thing in detail enough to make a great picture of it in mind. Waiting for the next chapter....

Tales Of THE BEST WRITER

Damn!! It is so good..... Totally worth my time...
Honestly, I was already reading this story before you asked me for a review swap..

The Gourmet Gladiator!

First I have not completed the book yet but wanted to give an early review as I am loving the book and cannot hold myself.
Second, I like how you have portrayed a fantasy world with relatable characters, it makes me wish that this kind of thing was real.
The paragraphs and chapters felt a bit long to me but it is a feast for action enthusiastic.
Overall you have a great story here.
Keep writing!

Are you sure you are not an experienced author?

I love to read works of new authors and love to find hidden gems but this book, I don't know what to say. It is just amazing! The author has amazing imagination and vocabulary.
After reading your work feels like I am nothing compared to it. Obviously I have a lot to learn. I am sure this book has potential to be a hit!
Keep writing!

A reason to live

I must say that even this is your first book you have done a great job. Like everyone else the first chapter is intense and hooked me up.
There were some words which didn't fit the lines but it's okay because it didn't interrupted with the flow.
Keep writing!

well written

Your descriptions are great and up to the point. Ignoring the punctuation errors, everything is great.
Keep writing!

Awesome so far

I like your idea and your details. Zoe's character feels so innocent. It's like she cannot even kill a mosquito.
Anyways, it would be good if you can give some description about their looks. It will help more to get in the story.
Keep writing!

So far good

The concept is good and you are very good with your words. There is problem with spacing in the fest chapter.
If you want to give credits then you can write an authors note before starting your story. As for the writing style it is my own preference. Don't feel bad it's really good!

Enjoyed it so far

I like your idea and you have a great story in mind. The grammar is the main problem and it did interrupted my flow.
Once you will correct that it will easy to read it.
Second thing, try to keep your chapter length in a uniform pattern. The first 4 chapters were small and then the 5 th chapter was long. So, try to keep the length same.
Keep writing!

Follow your lead!!!!!

I have no words! I liked your idea and being an erotic book the book directly dives in it. The scenes felt perfect.
Keep writing!!!

Good so far

I liked your description and everything related to it.
I was a bit confused when I started reading. You directly started it with all that description and her feelings. A prologue kind of thing would have helped. There are only 5 chapters so I hope you can look at the bigger picture and think about it.
Never start a sentence with full stop. The biggest mistake. I wanted to give an honest review. So, here it is! Don't take it to heart. Your story ca make a hit. Only a few changes and you are set. I suppose this is your first book. You can learn in the way!
Keep writing!!

Great!!!

Even if someone will tell me to find mistakes or pay me give a bad review my fingers will betray and automatically write only one thing for this book, 'I purple you'
This is amazing, the way you describe every feeling and use different metaphors, it's totally awesome!
Hope you will write more!
Keep writing!!

Loved it!

It is hard for me to find mistakes. A few grammatical mistakes are fine. You can edit them later.
I don't know what else to say. I am having mixed feelings.
Keep writing!!!!

Great

I like the details and your writing style is really good. It hooked me up immediately. I really like the cover of the book. It made me like if you won't read it you will regret it.
Keep it up and Keep writing!

Great start

I really like your descriptions and I guess this is the first book I didn't find any error. The only problem was the dialogue. If you can try to write dialogues in next line. As for the plot, this is only first chapter. There sure is a mystery and will wait for it to be revealed.\
Keep writing!

Nice

I don't stories which involve action or much in mafia because they cannot get that feel. After reading your book this became my favorite.
I like how you describe everything.
Keep writing!

Wow!

The prologue hook me up!
The summary and the prologue is absolutely awesome!
Keep writing!

Daughter of ice

I really like your story idea. It is something new and unique. I like your writing style a and the way you describe the surroundings. It helps make a clear image and make it more interesting. About the cover, it is really great and a type of cover if I saw it in a book store, I will definitely read this book!
Keep writing!

Great start

The name the cover of the book goes hand-in-hand.
Cover is the first thing the readers look at and you have covered it well.
I found it somewhat unique but it is hard to judge the plot because it is in its early stages. But the way you introduced the characters is really good and I think the plot is going to be great.
I like how she tries to be professional. The couple at the start was sweet.
Keep writing! It's gonna be great.

Needs improvement

I get the point of the book. An erotic book doesn't mean that all the attention should be given to make it hot. Grammar should also be proper. The grammar needs a lot of improvement. You can use apps to improve your writing.
The paragraphs were too long which disturbed my flow.
It didn't failed to give those vibes but still the grammar and writing style needs improvement.
Don't take it in a wrong way. I am only trying to pin point the mistake which may interrupt your ultimate goal.
Keep writing!

Creative

I really like your details on everything. It helps make the picture more ear and feels like you are inside the story and experiencing those feelings.
I feel like the rest is just normal drama but really like your streamy parts.
Keep writing!

Deviant!

I always like to read thriller suspense books. Though I write all romance and drama and humorous books but I like reading and watching them. I really like your writing style!
Keep writing!

A blade to my heart

The book is still in it's early stages so I cannot comment much. The story is good. The way you express things is also fab.
keep writing!

My eyes are wide open

This is one fucking great poem. I could actually imagine things in my mind. As I scroll down my heart starts to race and felt goosebumps all over. I don't know how to define this feeling. Anyways I wanna read more!!

Amazing!

I like the way you describe her fight with the ' BEAST'.
The book only has one chapter so i cannot comment on the plot but only by the first chapter i can tell that the book is amazing!

Loved it!!

The story is at it's early stage so I won't comment much on the plot. Till 5th chapter I loved the story.
I really love the cover of the story. Cover is the first thing that attracts readers if your cover is not up to the mark then even if your story is good it might receive the readers it deserves.
Time travel stories is hard to write as you need keep the dates and event in mind. Well you can maintain a book or diary for it. I won't comment much on that topic.
Anyways, I loved it!
Keep writing!!

Love it!

I really love Scarlet! She is so kind. The book is still in it early stages so I cannot comment much but i am sure that it is going to turn into a nice story!
Keep writing!!

Wanna know more!

This story looks interesting. I really wanna know more. Update soon!
Keep writing!!

Preserved in my mind

I really like that you explain every emotion in detail. Nothing was missed.
I don't know but I found the plot repetitive but that's okay. Everything else was great!

Sword Maiden

The cover is great!
Name of the story and the cover looks great and goes hand-in-hand.
The plot was good. Some grammatical errors but can be edited by re-reading or an editing app.
Overall I loved it!

Somewhere safe

First thing my prayers are for your Aunt. Hope she rests in peace.
I am in love with covers. The cover of the book attracts your readers. If it was in a book shop I would have surely picked this one.
I really love your story setting and the plot.
Keep writing!

Nice start

There is only one chapter and the story already has a lot of questions to answer. There were some grammatical mistakes but by using a grammar editing app can fix it.
Keep writing!

Already hooked up

The prologue is awesome.... Waiting for updates.
Keep writing!

Love online

The love the book and the story too but I don't know why I found the plot repetitive.
Your book deals with the current pandemic situations. This book will help a lot of readers and people suffering from mental break down!
Keep writing!!! Your book can help other people!!

Amazing!

First the cover!
It's amazing! people will first notice the cover and then the summary and story. Choosing the perfect cover for your book is important and I think you gave a lot of thought to it but it is worth it.
The plot
The plot is so good. The book in it's early stages but everyone can tell it's going to be amazing!
The prologue hooked me up!

I like it...

I like it but the story needs some improvements. there are some minor grammatical mistakes and the first chapter is confusing at first. You kept using the terms 'girl' and 'boy'. It made the story confusing.
Now, a major mistake which I have noticed in some more new writers woks. The first chapter. It shows that you have written two chapters but it is actually only one chapter. Please check that. The first chapter is wrong.
Don't use short forms in your story. Like 'bff', mention the whole thing. There are some more mistakes. You can use a editing software or app like 'Grammarly'.
Keep writing!!

Unique

Really loved it!
Will wait for next chapter!

Wow!

The prologue hooked me up!
Hope you will upload this book here too!

Nice!

As I expected the book to be...
I did had trouble reading. There was a lot of spacing in between the sentences. I don't why but it confused me a little but everything else was great!
Keep writing!!

Soulmate

This was something new... I have been reading many books related to soulmates but this book had something which made me read till the end.
Everything is perfect!
Keep writing...

Amazing!

I liked it so far and has a lot of potential.
Keep writing!

Funny!

This story made me laugh from the first chapter...Loved it!
Keep writing!

I love beach

The paragraphs are too long. While reading the dialogues, they are so close to each other which makes me lost.
There are too many changes required. A few changes and then you will have a perfect story for yourself.
Keep writing!

Love and life

I have read one more book of yours 'The Abandoned Song Book' and really loved it.
I really love the way you describe love and life.
When I read the previous book I literally cried and now I was smiling and crying.
Keep writing!

😭😢

The poem 'Pain' hits hard. Every line, every word attacks my inner self and tries to bring up a personality which I left behind or want to hide from everyone. Keep writing these poems they might help people!

Good plot!

The feelings are well expressed. The thing which confused me a lot was the prologue but overall it was great!
Keep writing!

I love BTS

The plot is always important in a story. If you don't have a good plot then there is no meaning to write the story.
Your book has a great plot and might be the best ff I have ever read. All the ff are about love and those silly things. They totally exploit idols in ffs.
Keep writing!

The Impossible

The name of the book is the first thing that attracted me. The cover well defines the book.
I really love the plot and it is different from other action/ romance.
Keep writing!

Alpha's Undead Mate

It is only one chapter but it has hooked me up.
I really want to know what happens next. Keep writing.

Awesome

The cover of the book is awesome. I am really into artistic things and your cover was the first thing that attracted me.
I have seen many authors describing there characters late. Like when you let your readers know there names there should at least be a para of something about them. This is why I fell in love with your writing style. The way you described every character especially Seth and her next door neighbour was up to the mark.
Keep it up.
Waiting for more!

Spooky

By the name of the book, no one can tell that it is a horror book. While writing horror it is really important to make things clear in a spooky way. The author has done a good job in expressing the emotions.
The main character and everything is well defined.

Loved it!

The story is great and have a smooth flow. It is really easy to catch up with words and easy to imagine the scenes in the head. It is very well written.
Keep up the good work!

Baby's

You need to improve with your punctuations and a little more chapters. It is a little confusing but I am sure you will improve yourself! Keep it up!

Loved it!

My stars are my answer. I did notice some punctuation mistakes but overall it is awesome..

Amazing!!

I never knew that the ugly naked guy was Mike(I have still not completed watching the whole series).
It was fantastic, and the way you described the six friends was so amazing and accurate.
At first I thought that he falls in love with Rachel because he knew her from the café but it was Phoebe.
you totally nailed it!!!

Love the story

Honestly, I don't personally like stories about social anxiety but after reading your story I feel like I should read more of them. Their world is totally different from our world. Overall I love your story and character build up.

Amazing

Love the plot.... love your style of writing but need to improvise the punctuation use and starting the conversation with capital letters. Over all love the story.

Die for love

Well, I felt that start was little rushed and there was not much information but things turned out well with the flow. It was a great story and I enjoyed reading it!
Keep writing!