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Awakening (Born of Shadows #1)

"Very well written paranormal story with strong plot and characters. Good job. Please keep writing. MR. "

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Great Story

"It is a story that is worth reading. "

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Intriguing

"So far I'm enjoying the story, the author clearly planned this story well, the descriptions are beautiful and realistic, and I like how each character is different. Plus, I can easily feel the emotions of the characters which really makes me enjoy this book even more."

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Interesting!

"The author's has painted a vivid picture here. I like the world building and character descriptions. Each character has a distinct personality and they stand out from the others. However, I was confused about the story itself. I read first ten chapters. There's a lot of world building in the beginning itself, which is not preferred method of story telling. But there's nothing wrong with breaking the rules. What was lacking in the plot was main character goal. Even after reading the first ten chapters, I couldn't figure out what was Tatianna's purpose. What did she want to achieve? Without specific goals, it's really hard to connect with her. Adding a purpose in the first chapter itself will elevate the entire plot. The good thing about the story was decent grammar. Though there were some typos, for the most part the diction was on point. Really good job author! "

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Awakening

"Please update asap and regularly. Love this book"

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