What is your opinion?
Secret enchantment the final note
"Some grammar issues!! But all in all this story is awesome to read!! Thank you so much for sharing your work!!"
Secret enchantment final note
"Beautifully written. This is a story for everyone. It has magic, love, friendship... so many emotions in one book. Love it to the core ❤❤❤"
The Final Note
"Another work well done. I’ve noticed a few spelling errors which I know you’d fix now that it’s completed, but girl! You sure got a talent. I think the second book is even more better than the first, there is nothing that I didn’t like. I feel for Ian though. I totally recommend this book to everyone out there!!"
Loved it
"I REALLY LOVE ALL OF IT I DO NOT DISLIKE ANYTHING ITS AMAZING IT HAS EVEFYTHING I WASS LOOKING FOR "
Enchanting!
"I didn't read the first book because this review is upon your request, but while I was reading The Final Note, I couldn't help thinking "I've gotta read the first book to know what happened!" because the system of the story, the heart of it, and the way you built it is all initiated in the first book, but I have this feeling that the notion of soulmates in the story will be broken because I could sense an existing chemistry between Ian and Sarina. The story has a smooth flow, and the way you finished each chapter with a cliffhanger made me want to continue, but to make your chapters more appealing to the readers, avoid word and phrases repetition. For example in chapter 5: the reader knows that the dialogue is happening between Celine and Sarina, so there's no need to mention Celine's name in every bit of the dialogue. Also, pay attention to the punctuation and no need to use dialogue tags all the time, mix it up with action beat! It's a good story, and I loved how I could sympathize with Sarina; it means that she's a strong and affecting female lead. Good work, and looking forward to more chapters!!"
The final note.
"I have read the first book in this series and let me tell you, that was the best fantasy book that I have read, it had a unique plot with a whole new world. And the Clift hangers were just perfectly executed and also the way the author disclosed the culprit that was totally unexpected. And I can’t wait to see how this book turns out too. But I know that this would be equally fascinating like the first one. A MUST READ BOOK YOU GOT TO TRY OUT."
