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Syalie

"I've read this story before in Fanfiction.net and I'm still love it, thank you very very much. Seems like I'm not the only one that think Tim's feature (specially when he's slim) have several similarity with Gibbs"

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Take it Back

"I can't tell you how many times I've though "aren't they so much alike." Thank you for writing this. I like the way you introduced the plot line with the undercover job and then the idea of what kind of bastard Admiral McGee really was. You kept me on pins and needles all the way through."

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