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Bewitched

"Astrig tells the story of a girl who finds out nothing's too literal for the human eye - for there are powers lurking inside us, hidden and unfathomable. I like the concept and the worldbuilding. It's slow-paced but the build-up as the story progresses will take you by surprise. Characters are well-written and their firm voices will keep you reading for more. You have something great going on here especially your characters which I know you know so well. xD It's a telltale sign that the plot is building up to a crescendo until the last chap. Engaging and a true-page turner for me. Keep writing author! This is a promising story. :)"

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Awesome Story

"Kept me on the edge of my seat. I love all the blood and gore and the evil that slowly rises in the mind of the young witch. I would love to hear more about this Astrig. But I wouldn't want to piss her off."

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