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Yes!

"This book is different and it pulls you in. I’m truly enjoying it and I can’t wait to know how it all ends! Keeps the good work! 😘"

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Adored!

"I tremendously enjoyed your book! I loved the characters and setting you created. You took a common story and really turned it into something special. The way you wrote Red was just amazing. She was a spitfire and completely original. You wrote really well for her age and the diagloge was really realistic, nothing felt cringy or awkward. Something I also enjoyed is how well your writing flows. There are a few mistakes but all very minor. Nothing to hard to fix, just give it a once over. Keep writing "

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A Little Crimson

"Why hasn't anyone reviewed and / or commented on this novel? This was superb writing and I was thrilled to turn the pages! Your world-building, dialogue and sense of style is unique. The plot made me keep me on the edge of my seat. Your characters are not two dimensional, something I don't see often in novels, which frustrates the hell out of me. Your descriptions don't drag, they tell it as it is and I can envision the world you created. Your dialogues were superb and grammar near perfection. This is fantasy at its best and I highly recommend this book become published. I hope this will come to fruitation, as this was outstanding. Well done! ~Rose~"

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OMG

"OK. So i hated the part that you had her taken away and the story was broken and boring for me to read the last part. I loved the fact that they were soulmates and the had intimate feelings for each other. Overall very good book."

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