Early stage

"I read the first chapter and it clearly shows Sara is a strong and courageous women who loves her husband and do anything for him. Janet's character bit annoyed me, I mean whatever the reason is, you can't kiss or pretend to kiss a married man. She may apologized to Sara but it seems like something fishy is going in her mind. Sara is brave enough to hit her with her slipper. Here u feel bad for Janet and her face but if we think from Sara's point of view she may did the right thing. At someplaces punctuation mistakes spotted, read it once and you will know. Great start Keep going."