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"First, I applaud you trying to write a girlxgirl book and what a good start to it. Though it started off strong, this is only the introduction. I am hoping this gets to change soon, and you update. I would be willing to change my views once you update at least three to four chapters. Keep in mind grammar and punctuation, plot and character development and story structure. I would be looking for them as I read along. Good luck to you."