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I am intrigued now.

"The plot is just- I love it. Though there were some grammar mistakes, it is still good! I like how you made a serious main plot issue, but also was able to add in some more light-hearted stuff too! I would recommend this to my friends and maybe even family. Good job!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation