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The Game FWB#3

"JA does it again. This erotica will leave you grinding on the edge of your chair! I believe JA will only continue to create stories that are hotter than the last. With imagination and creativity as this Ja could dominate the erotica world. Request to the author: I would like dark fantasy erotica, please. -Essence Savagery!"

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The Game FWB #3

"Good story with good characters. A great plot with an interesting twist. Overall a good read. Look forward to reading further stories."

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Loved it

"Entertaining story and great characters. Sexy was 🥵🔥 Definitely recommend "

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The Game FWB#3

"Lovely story , made interesting with the game and the twist in it ..."

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The Game

"I absolutely loved this story. This was not the sort of adventure that you normally expect with erotica. This was a great plot line, and the sex just made it hot, hot, hot. Mr. White has an amazing way to take you on a journey with his stories, and this one did not disappoint. A little proof read to correct some grammar and punctuation would make it perfect, however, it did not take away from the story. GREAT JOB. And as always, I'll look forward to your next work; I'm a big fan."

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Splendid

"I loved the story the plot and every emotion the author has put out in here ... ❤️❤️❤️"

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