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Thuggishly Good

"Quite the exciting and gripping story. Each chapter left the reader wanting more. However, there were times when things felt a little too dragged out and there were a few spelling errors. Overall, a good thug/criminal empire story."

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Good read

"Very exciting. UT tge story is taking too lotto enfold. "

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Sad that the guys died

"I liked the whole plot but hated that the good guys died "

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Good read

"Not only one demented character but two. Interested to see how this plays our "

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Amazing plot! with a lot of twist.

"Love how Aaliyah to be feisty yet lovable. Hope she ended up with Kallen. rather than to the abusive and devil ex-hubby of hers. "

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Kallens Obession

"Great story so far. Please update soon. Looking forward to the update. 🤗"

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Read this story now! Amazing!

"Although the story isn't finished yet, I wanted to write a review to let others know how fantastic it is! I've never felt so many mixed emotions while I'm deep in fantasy fiction but the author does an excellent job of pulling at your heartstrings between the couples in the story. She equally makes your blood boil too because you love the characters early on and don't want anything to happen to them. I'm eagerly waiting for the rest of the story to unfold. Wonderful job! ♥️"

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Nice story

"Story is good... but violence is too much "

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Surprising

"Did know what to expect, but I cannot stop reading."

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Kellan obsesion

"It very good"

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Kallen's obsession

"This story has definitely kept my attention and now I'm hoping that it doesn't get too dark."

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Gets confusing

"The plot and story line are good. The jumping between characters and timelines make it hard to follow at times. Add to that the fact that names are sometimes left out, if gets a little confusing. For example, when Aaliyah is behind bars and tries to escape, she’s caught and punished. Her punisher isn’t named so you don’t know if it’s holt or someone else. "

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