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Cute and realistic!

"I found myself surprisingly drawn in by the authors quirky writing style and dialog. The way they shape the character really mirrors kids of the same age and the child like way there thoughts process. The plot is curious and definitely leads you into wanting to know more. Im very eager to see what the author is going to do with each character. The only real issues I had was simple grammer and editing mistakes. Nothing else. Keep writing !"

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