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What is your opinion?
Enjoyed it so far
"I like your idea and you have a great story in mind. The grammar is the main problem and it did interrupted my flow. Once you will correct that it will easy to read it. Second thing, try to keep your chapter length in a uniform pattern. The first 4 chapters were small and then the 5 th chapter was long. So, try to keep the length same. Keep writing! "
What Goes Around Comes Around
"So the grammar wasn't the best and really disrupted the flow of the story. A cover with the title on it would be much better."
