It's dark outside

"It's dark, and darkness is everywhere. Ok. I got it. "Show, don't tell" is my advice. Too many questions. The writer should let the reader think about all the questions He/she shouldn't be afraid that we don't understand. We are not that dumb. I don't know if the story has potential since I quit after the ninth "Dark/Darkness" in barely four short paragraphs. The reader feels overwhelmed by "dark/darkness" redundancy and unwanted questions. I'm sorry. I don't like to write such ruthless reviews, but I'd like to read this story once edited. Good luck, Bianca"