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My (mostly) poetry

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Summary

Some of my poetry (mostly) - take it or leave it. I'm not good (never have been) and it's not the rhyming type usually. It's more freestyle. Enjoy. Hopefully someone out there will.

Genre
Poetry
Author
Kris N
Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
24
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Intro and Echosmith (Tell Her You Love Her)

Tell Her You Love Her by Echosmith

If you haven't ever listened to Echosmith, I'd suggest that you give them a try. They are an awesome group and have many good songs. They haven't been out but a few years but already have a few top hit. I'm 51 years old and listen to all kinds of music and this song and Bright are two of my favorites in the romance/love genre.

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Tell her a story

Tell her the honest truth

You treat her better

Make sure to see it through

Don’t be just everything she wants

Be everything she needs

When she says she loves you

Tell her you love her too

Give her a reason

A reason to love all you do

She’ll tell you secrets

You’ll tell her secrets too

She’ll tell you all her hopes and dreams

You’ll tell them too

When she says she loves you

Tell her you love her too

Tell her you love her too

But don’t you run away, run away

When you get tired

’Cause this will slip away, slip away

And start a fire

That can never be put out

Oh, hurry, time is running out

But don’t you run away, run away

Before you tell her you love her

When she says she needs you

Tell her you need her too

You tell her clearly

Speak what your heart wants you to

Tell her she’s lovely

Always tell her the truth

When she says she loves you

Tell her you love her too

But don’t you run away, run away

When you get tired

’Cause this will slip away, slip away

And start a fire

That can never be put out

Oh, hurry, time is running out

But don’t you run away, run away

Before you tell her you love her

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Beautiful ❤

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