What is your opinion?
Red
"It was really interesting and fun to read keeo up the good work"
Good book
"Keep up the lovely work."
Red
"Imma continue reading this book. What I have to say is that it's easy to comprehend and I like stories like these. Keep up the good work author"
Red
"Okay so I'm still reading your story I must say it's great for a murderers point of view how amazingly you killed poor Kerrie flattered me a great deal it would've been great if you would've detailed a little about certain things like why Martha is so rude to her daughter? What beef does she have with Bree? Anyways it's good the plot is going smooth so far looking forward for more kills! ✨❤️"
Description
"So um, I read the first chapter of your book. Judging from the summary, you do know where your going with your story which is pretty great.💕 My only problem is you need to work out on your description. Help us writers create a perfect imagination. That’s what we are here for. To feel everything you write, hear, smell. Don’t just summarize your work. Describe all characters, take time to tell us how Nessy’s parents look like... Kerrie’s house, Nessy herself and so many others. Your punctuations are quite great. I love the spacing. Quite flattered. Don’t give up 💗"
