What is your opinion?
Awesome writing style
"This is so good, the puzzle and the solution of it is soo creative and I loved the orange liquid part!! And at the end sadly Jenna died 😞"
Perfect !
"Ok, at first I thought it would be 100-200 wording story but no, you did an brilliant job of making this short story above 1000 WORDS!!! Now to the Plot ( I won't be a Story-Spoiler) It started of with a very breathtaking scenery explanation, then the first scene ended with a dangerous twist which shook me to my core and it really did made me curious if the story genre is going to take place in history but you, a talented author unexpectedly changed it to other set (place of story) without even giving a hint , you know it's one of the writing talents to switch over without giving hint to he reader and makes the reader enjoy more since they had no idea it would happen. Every part of explanation has been gloriously done in a obvious & not-confusing way so yes it's a success so far! The one way how it's different from other stories is that it has very less character which is not a bad thing since the reader wants to focus on the main characters than the support roles separate story going on. I don't know about others but in a novel I usually skip parts of scenes and parts of support roles since I am so into main ones that it's time wasting to wait when will the main character's scene come....To your writing style and grammar: So far I haven't found any spelling errors nor grammar errors but what I suggest you is to use more grammar, like don't just use the same old grammar rule of writing a sentence , do use new one for example passive voice, other ways of structuring sentences. The ones you are using isn't incorrect but it's same that's why. Your writing style is good , you know how to place time-lapse, how to jump to scenes so good job! Towards the ending of story, OMG : I really really LOVE the ending most even though it wasn't expected and yes the ending ... ooof it's the main highlight !!! SO overall Your story Deserves PERFECT 5 STARS ! To the readers reading my review, please do give a try to read this as you won't regret at all !! The Author deserves more respect who invested her time, energy, talent and dedicated her ideas so hats off to the Author!"
Jena
"So she died🤧🤧 Honestly I liked the plot of the story. When I was a child, I used to fantasize about stories like these, where someone gets stuck on an island and I even used to watch cartoons related to the plot here in Jena. So when I started reading this book, it brought a whole lot of sweet childhood memories♥︎"
Bless you.
"It’s a beautiful masterpiece of a young mind. Surely will recommend this for young readers. Mashallah you’ll get where you want to go to."
Loved it buttttttttt I want more stories
"Loved it follow me please and join the writing competition bye bye😂😂😂👋👋👋 Basically I love the ending even though its... no I won't be a story spoiler. BTW Anyone reading this I promise that you are going to like this 1000 words story .Please read this story and also read 'Imperfect Sides' Regards"
Jena
"First try and amazing work"
Jena
"This book is a great book, I like this one better than the last but they both have great ideas. I kinda like longer books but this is good, Kinda predictable. but nevertheless its a great book. I do have a few pointers though -when you are writing a books, its important to keep the conversation out of a informational paragraph unless your doing something like this, heres and example "my favorite color is pink" she said "what's yours??" if that makes sense - try to add more details, like what does the character look like, what do the other chracters look like, what does the surroundings look like -its a bit fast paced, its ok to go slow but not to too slow enough to bore readers Its a great book, keep working on writing, inkitt does have a blog and something called "inkitt writers bootcamp" or something like that, check them out, its really informational, if i don't know how to do something correctly, I look and see if it is addressed."
Nice
"The story was interesting. I was a bit surprised when I got a paragraph and you were like the animals were telling her to leave. Nothing suggested that the story was fantastical. And it felt like a Moana spin-off with the rock part. It's a simple and easy enough to enjoy. With a little improvement on the grammar, it would be a far more enjoyable read."
