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"Can’t wait to read the finished work! Awesome plot so far "
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"I like the premise of the story, and you have the chance to do some really great world-building. Unfortunately, this doesn't happen all that much in these first few chapters you have uploaded. In my opinion, it feels like you just list information and it didn't manage to excite my imagination with some nice descriptions. In addition, the first chapter is too long for an opening chapter, with nothing "explosive" happening to keep the reader intrigued. Keep up the hard work!"
