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Big girls don't cry

"I really enjoyed this book. Can't wait to read the second one."

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Phtophecy

"Love it thus book"

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Love it!!!!

"I can’t stop reading!! I love this book. Very detailed. "

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great book !

"Despite the grammatical errors which I'm sure when writing a story as juicy as this one, you may have just breezed past. This book has a never-ending introduction to characters, is filled to the brim with action ....and the explicit scenes written in hard detail are just phenomenal! love the story and love how even for a second with the details ever-changing that I knew exactly what was going on. you weren't vague with anything and I love the inclusivity of expressing not too common sexuality in your novel. I am absolutely excited to start this next novel!!!"

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Big girls don’t cry

"The book was a great story, there was some errors but not so bad you couldn’t understand. The author has a really big twist inside and it does cause people not to go through with the book it’s a great start on mental health and the thought process "

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PERFECT..

"The middle was a little confusing but it clearly bounced back, I'm going to read book 2 because now I'm so hooked.. YEESSS she's a bad ass queen.. Great book Author CONGRATULATIONS to you for your writing skills and Thanks For Sharing✌🏽"

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Big girls don't cry.

"Loved storey and characters, never a full moment, starting sequel now."

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Interesting

"At times the plot did get a little hard to follow, but that was what we were warned about. You just have to give it a chance and everything lines out. It really was nice and I look forward to starting the next one. So yeah, y'all should read this. It's pretty good."

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Big girls don't cry

"Absolutely love this story!! It kept me on the edge of my seat! I couldn't put it down..I can not wait to read book 2!!!"

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Big Girls Don’t Cry

"Story captures the reader, although grammatical errors are a distraction. Some minor spelling and punctuation errors, but a good read. The beginning was a bit confusing with some of the things that happened, but was explained later on."

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Big girls don’t cry

"Loved everything and every character in your book! Starting the next book now! Congrats 🙃"

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Big girls don't cry

"A book has to interest me in the first few pages or I won't read ,right from the start it captivated me really well done can't wait to read more"

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Love it

"Love it Will recommend it to anyone who loves to read Wonderful "

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Big Girls Don’t Cry

"Absolutely loved it. Can’t wait to read the next book. You write wonderfully. Can’t wait to read what happens next "

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Good read

"It's depressing but suspensful"

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Raised Eyebrow

"Very confusing "

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Big girl don't cry

"The book is good .and very emotional. I enjoyed till end .really good work by author. Nice plot and each character I loved all"

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Big girls don't cry

"Not bad but confusing at times"

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Big Girls Don't Cry

"This book is fast-paced and has a ton of detail in a complex plot, filled with characters introduced at different points in the story. Sometimes, it is too fast-paced and jumps from one event to another, events to which the characters have strange reactions. 1] In one chapter, in a second, Aleida goes from telling Miliano that her favourite roses are blue roses to her being determined on rejecting him and going back to her old pack. This is after he tells her that he loves her while she cries in his arms and sits on his lap, essentially giving off vibes that she accepts him. This doesn't make sense to me. How can Aleida change her mood so quickly, even with Hailey inside of her? 2)Why does everything always have to "go black" for Aleida. She faints at the end or middle of most chapters when hearing the biggest or smallest of information, and using this too much lessens the intended effect of shock and suspense, I assume. When she does faint, Instead of saying "everything goes black," I suggest describing how Aleida feels when she faints and not telling us directly. Maybe she feels the room spinning, she's swaying on her feet, or her heart rate spikes in panic before she loses consciousness. 3) When a new character is introduced, I don't always see their importance, and some appear for a chapter or two and then we don't hear about them again, making me question what their purpose was and how they add to the plot. Apart from these observations, this is a good book. I read the fourth book in the series accidentally (I didn't check your profile to see your other books), but I went back to the beginning after finishing it."

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Language!

"Take out the Lord’s name in vain and it would be an excellent book. "

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